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“I am not the body, which is but dust I am not fickle and limited mind To whom then comes the feral trust of lust Or, for that matter, thoughts loving and kind. “

"Please explore this line of inquiry as it resonates within"

For contest (To Whom Does This Come, sponsored by Unseeking Seeker)

1 Corinthians 15:41-45 KJV

There is one glory of the sun, and another glory of the moon, and another glory of the stars: for one star differeth from another star in glory.

[42] So also is the resurrection of the dead. It is sown in corruption; it is raised in incorruption:

[43] It is sown in dishonour; it is raised in glory: it is sown in weakness; it is raised in power: [44] It is sown a natural body; it is raised a spiritual body. There is a natural body, and there is a spiritual body. [45] And so it is written, The first man Adam was made a living soul; the last Adam was made a quickening spirit.

The Battle Rages 

I am an egg. Not an onion. 
My layers do not run so deep.
Shell, yolk, albumin,
My own 3-in- 1 Trinity!

And why not? Says I...
For in His likeness was I formed.
From the purity of the body of Spirit
Into this wretched flesh was I born.

There's the albumin and there's the shell,
But where's the yolk, pray tell?
Why,  the soul! The essence of I, myself, and me!
My soul, made by God and always traveling. 

A spiritual home, was once my souls abode,
And no boxes there to pack when I moved to my fleshly home.
All three parts of me living in this shell made of dirt and dust, Always quarreling, always a fuss.

My purity of Spirit urged me to do good, to be kind, forgiving, as I should...
And the flesh is feral, selfish, very easily offended.
Listening to self and demonic forces, not as God intended.

This battle has Raged for thousands of years,
But He made a way for us to live without fear!
Each part of me is so hungry! Hungry for food both physical and spiritual. Whichever we feed the most, grows the stronger still.

The flesh yearns for self-satisfaction, self-gratification...
While the Spirit looks for words of Truth and self Moderation.
Feed the Spirit to keep him strong and in control...
Starve the flesh of self and you'll keep a pure and happy soul!



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Date: 10/20/2024 2:37:00 AM
Wow! Are you a teacher? This is great and would be wonderful for bible study or vacation bible school! I love this wholesome take on the contest. Best wishes for a win!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 10/21/2024 3:42:00 AM
Awww thank you so much! I am a teacher lol...i guess we can't stop teaching, even in poetry! I was raised Baptist but had a bad experience... no blame intended to Baptist faith but it caused me to search for God beyond the limitations I was used to. And God led me to more and more truth and understanding. I am a Christian but I do not like the boundaries and disunity of denominations. I study the Bible for myself, always praying for wisdom and truth. I denounce traditions of men and claim the promises in the Word of God... keeping an open mind because I learn something new daily! Anyway, it is my passion to learn and share what I'm given. I have much to learn still but I stand amazed at God's love and power! Idk why I just gave you that testimony but there it is lol! ;)<3 xoxo
Date: 10/17/2024 1:11:00 PM
You have done well Crystol..Great thoughts And expressions.' Biblicly sound.)
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Crystol Woods
Date: 10/18/2024 10:05:00 AM
Why thank you Joe! Xo
Date: 10/17/2024 7:10:00 AM
Our view of some of the details may differ but the gist of your poem we can agree on, ie, the need to feed and satisfy the spirit - Matthew 5:3. Hope you have a peaceful, happy week
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Crystol Woods
Date: 10/18/2024 10:04:00 AM
Good good! Sir...;)
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Tom Woody
Date: 10/17/2024 7:25:00 AM
Yes ma'am
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Crystol Woods
Date: 10/17/2024 7:13:00 AM
Awe thanks Tom! So good to hear from you! Hoping you are well!? Xo
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