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TO THE SMILE-HEXSONNETTA

To The Smile - Hexsonnetta Enchanting curl of lips Soft n'pink with rosy tips Wet dew of honey flows lustrous pearls' silver glows Sweet taste of nectar sips Fountain of healing snows Arms open flight in air.... Happy embrace as you stare Naked feet, wet grass-bed Senses soothe as you spread Frown n' folly you repair Life's tender charms you fed Ambiguous or lost roads your car parks n' stress goes!! © Anulaxmi Nayak,2015 For Andrea's Hexsonnetta contest Date: 20th August 2015

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Date: 8/30/2015 6:43:00 AM
This plays with the romantic senses, beautifully done!
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Anulaxmi Nayak
Date: 8/30/2015 6:49:00 AM
Dear Casarah, thank you very much:-):-):-) your visit and words means a lot to me......love n' hugs, Anu:-)
Date: 8/24/2015 2:05:00 PM
Hey Anulaxmi, stopped by for a visit. This is a lovely sonnet - so well written and with such beautiful imagery. Well done and best wishes in the contest! Be Blessed, Neva
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Anulaxmi Nayak
Date: 8/24/2015 2:17:00 PM
Dear Neva, thank you very much for stopping by to read my poem and for your appreciative words....means a lot to me..thanks again....love, Anu:-)
Date: 8/21/2015 1:37:00 PM
You have a good sense of rhyme and rhythm and can put feelings into your word choices. The poem is structured well and flows smoothly. Emile.
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Anulaxmi Nayak
Date: 8/21/2015 9:18:00 PM
Dear Emile, thank you so much for your visitto my poem and your words of appreciation:-)I am motivated to write when I Get supportive comments and i feel so happy....thank you again.love, Anu:-)
Date: 8/21/2015 7:28:00 AM
Anul, oh so beautifully penned, 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, lover of writing . . .
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Anulaxmi Nayak
Date: 8/21/2015 7:35:00 AM
Dear Broken wings, thank you very much dear for your kind visit and your valuable words and 7!...feeling honoured....thanks again dear...love, Anu:-)
Date: 8/20/2015 12:20:00 PM
Very tender and romantic. Marvelous images that unfold as the poem progresses. Good luck, dear Anulaxmi!
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Anulaxmi Nayak
Date: 8/20/2015 12:35:00 PM
Dear Demetrios, thank you so much for stopping to visit my poem and leave your valuable feedback...thanks again...love, Anu:-)
Date: 8/20/2015 8:34:00 AM
The lovely imagery made me smile Anu good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Anulaxmi Nayak
Date: 8/20/2015 8:39:00 AM
oh...sorry for the wrong paste dear Jan..thank you for the feedback dear....wow...if it made you smile i am more than happy dear!......love n' hugs, Anu:-)
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Anulaxmi Nayak
Date: 8/20/2015 8:36:00 AM
Dear Ravi, Thank you for the feedback:-)
Date: 8/20/2015 7:51:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 8/20/2015 8:40:00 AM
Dear Ravi, thank you for the feedback:-)....love, Anu:-)