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To the Smile-Hexsonnetta

To The Smile - Hexsonnetta 
                     

Enchanting curl of lips
Soft n'pink with rosy tips
Wet dew of honey flows
lustrous pearls' silver glows
Sweet taste of nectar sips
Fountain of healing snows

Arms open flight in air....
Happy embrace as you stare
Naked feet, wet grass-bed
Senses soothe as you spread
Frown n' folly you repair
Life's tender charms you fed

Ambiguous or lost roads
your car parks n' stress goes!!


© Anulaxmi Nayak,2015
For Andrea's Hexsonnetta contest
Date: 20th August 2015

Copyright © Anu Nayak | Year Posted 2015

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Casarah Nance Date: 8/30/2015 6:43:00 AM This plays with the romantic senses, beautifully done! Login to Reply Anu Nayak Date: 8/30/2015 6:49:00 AM Dear Casarah, thank you very much:-):-):-) your visit and words means a lot to me......love n' hugs, Anu:-)

Neva Romaine Date: 8/24/2015 2:05:00 PM Hey Anulaxmi, stopped by for a visit. This is a lovely sonnet - so well written and with such beautiful imagery. Well done and best wishes in the contest! Be Blessed, Neva Login to Reply Anu Nayak Date: 8/24/2015 2:17:00 PM Dear Neva, thank you very much for stopping by to read my poem and for your appreciative words....means a lot to me..thanks again....love, Anu:-)

Emile Pinet Date: 8/21/2015 1:37:00 PM You have a good sense of rhyme and rhythm and can put feelings into your word choices. The poem is structured well and flows smoothly. Emile. Login to Reply Anu Nayak Date: 8/21/2015 9:18:00 PM Dear Emile, thank you so much for your visitto my poem and your words of appreciation:-)I am motivated to write when I Get supportive comments and i feel so happy....thank you again.love, Anu:-)

Constance La France Date: 8/21/2015 7:28:00 AM Anul, oh so beautifully penned, 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, lover of writing . . . Login to Reply Anu Nayak Date: 8/21/2015 7:35:00 AM Dear Broken wings, thank you very much dear for your kind visit and your valuable words and 7!...feeling honoured....thanks again dear...love, Anu:-)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/20/2015 12:20:00 PM Very tender and romantic. Marvelous images that unfold as the poem progresses. Good luck, dear Anulaxmi! Login to Reply Anu Nayak Date: 8/20/2015 12:35:00 PM Dear Demetrios, thank you so much for stopping to visit my poem and leave your valuable feedback...thanks again...love, Anu:-)

Jan Allison Date: 8/20/2015 8:34:00 AM The lovely imagery made me smile Anu good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Anu Nayak Date: 8/20/2015 8:39:00 AM oh...sorry for the wrong paste dear Jan..thank you for the feedback dear....wow...if it made you smile i am more than happy dear!......love n' hugs, Anu:-) Anu Nayak Date: 8/20/2015 8:36:00 AM Dear Ravi, Thank you for the feedback:-)

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 8/20/2015 7:51:00 AM Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it. Login to Reply Anu Nayak Date: 8/20/2015 8:40:00 AM Dear Ravi, thank you for the feedback:-)....love, Anu:-)