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We were ‘married’ on poetry soup I kept my hubby right in the loop I still rue the day That you went away I need to dry my tears and regroup Loved your humour right from the start I miss you with all of my heart Want you to come back Get you in the sack* Then they’ll never tear us apart! * In case you are wondering … Darren and I are simply amazing friends and this is a cheeky line from one of the last mails he sent me in October. I miss you my lovely friend 2nd February 2015 Contest: A Valentine Limerick SKAT A

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 5/28/2015 8:03:00 PM

We've all missed Darren's presence here on the Soup. I sure hope we get to see the two of you writing together again... Congrats on a win with these fantastic limericks, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/29/2015 1:08:00 AM

Thanks so much Kelly:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/28/2015 9:18:00 AM

Jan, your limerick set is awesome. Congrats. One I would like to see higher!!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/28/2015 9:20:00 AM

Me too Andrea I was disappointed for Darren to be honest:-( Hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/27/2015 5:18:00 PM

Jan, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~

Jan Allison
Date: 5/28/2015 2:33:00 AM

Thanks Linda:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 5/27/2015 4:57:00 PM

Congratulations, Jan, on your win in the contest! Such a great well-written but sad tribute to your missing friend! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 5/27/2015 4:59:00 PM

Thanks Sandra - never a day goes by I don't think of him - we share matching keyrings which I use every day. He always said how proud he was of me and the progress I was making with my writing so I send him some of my poems in each letter:-) I still hold on to the dream we will write together again one day:-) Hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 5/27/2015 12:39:00 PM

Back with congratulations, Jan. This was one of the best emotional entries. Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 5/27/2015 2:05:00 PM

I have to admit I am a little disappointed it didn't place higher Paul but c'est la vie! Hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 5/27/2015 10:12:00 AM

Wonderful write Jan.. congrats on your win

Jan Allison
Date: 5/27/2015 10:16:00 AM

Thanks Joseph - never a day goes by when I don't think of my lovely friend Darren:-( Hugs jan xx

Skat A

Date: 5/27/2015 10:09:00 AM

Jan Congratulations, thanks for the contest support. Hugs SKAT

Jan Allison
Date: 5/27/2015 10:15:00 AM

Oh thanks so much SKAT - I have a letter to post to Darren - I hope and pray his health improves and he is back with us again one day:-) Hugs jan xx

Kp Nunez

Date: 2/10/2015 11:01:00 PM

I never get enough of your type of humor, Jan. Laughter shines through even though you miss your soup soul mate so much. A 7...Kim:)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/11/2015 3:11:00 AM

Even though my current situation is very sad Kim I have tried to write with humour ever since i joined the site. If you read any of Darrens poems or our 'jadazzle united' poems you will see why he is so so special to me:-) Hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 2/10/2015 3:17:00 PM

Yes, Jan, your tit for tat humour shows what good friends you were. hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 2/10/2015 3:36:00 PM

We are simply Poetry soup soul mates who have never had the chance to meet Paul :-) hugs Jan xx

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/5/2015 2:56:00 PM

Beautifully done; I'm glad you're friends.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/5/2015 4:47:00 PM

Darren is the best friend I have never met:-( Hugs jan xx

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/5/2015 2:50:00 PM

That is cute. Glad you're friends.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/5/2015 4:46:00 PM

I miss him so much ML I hope and pray one day he will be back in my life and maybe we will even write again:-) Hugs jan xx

Richard Pickett

Date: 2/5/2015 10:18:00 AM

Very nice write here Jan. I have been away for some time now, and it's good to be back. Love it.....Taz

Jan Allison
Date: 2/5/2015 10:21:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by great to have you back - i am hoping and praying one day darren will also return:-) hugs Jan xxxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 2/5/2015 8:07:00 AM

i agree with you Jan.. :) Darren commented on some of my poems before and really like your poem together :)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/5/2015 9:35:00 AM

I hope and pray one day we will write again and jadazzle truly will be reunited:-) Hugs Jan xx

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 2/5/2015 5:39:00 AM

truly lovely tribute jan

Jan Allison
Date: 2/5/2015 9:34:00 AM

Thanks Liam:-) Hugs Jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 2/4/2015 4:47:00 PM

No better tribute than to get your Poetry Pal whom broke your heart, bedding into your words. Good luck girl, hugs, James xx

James Fraser
Date: 2/4/2015 5:19:00 PM

He's in my prayers Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 2/4/2015 4:54:00 PM

LOL James love the clever pun. Sadly Darren has been ill for quite some months now - he has such an amazing sense of humour and only he knows the other part to the in the sack line lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/4/2015 9:16:00 AM

This is a wonderful tribute to your friend Jan. I will say a prayer for him.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/4/2015 9:21:00 AM

Thanks Richard I miss him so much as the most amazing friend I have never met - your prayers for him are much appreciated:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/3/2015 6:23:00 PM

I do hope he recovers so that he can come here and laugh at your funny poems again, and also start writing again WITH you.Those were wonderful days and I know how much you miss them!! Funny poems, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/3/2015 6:27:00 PM

Thanks Andrea - I will never find anyone to take his place we have that special magic when we write together and I hope and pray one day it will happen again for us:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jack Horne

Date: 2/3/2015 3:14:00 PM

lol, I'm sure Darren will have a good chuckle when he sees this one!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/3/2015 3:17:00 PM

I will send it to him Jack as he has not been on the site for many months - I hope and pray he will be back with us again one day I miss him so much in my life his friendship truly means the world to me:-) Hugs Jan xx

David Meade

Date: 2/2/2015 6:27:00 PM

I never met/read this amazing young man but gifted he must be . . . to sack sweat dear Jan would be a feat indeed!! 7

Jan Allison
Date: 2/3/2015 1:19:00 AM

He is my poetry soup soulmate David we wrote together under the name Jadazzle United. I miss his being in my life as a wonderful friend and hope he will be back in contact soon:-) Hugs jan xx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/2/2015 4:15:00 PM

Oh Jan...I feel like sending out a posse to find him and rope him up and bring him back to you. I know this pain, sweetie....Hang tight....HUGS

Jan Allison
Date: 2/2/2015 4:33:00 PM

If the timing was different I would fly over to the UK to visit him ... maybe one day:-) Hugs Jan x

Tim Smith

Date: 2/2/2015 3:53:00 PM

Excellent my friend...hoping he returns soon...hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 2/2/2015 3:59:00 PM

I hope and pray he is returning to good health and will be back Tim. I miss his friendship and his fun:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/2/2015 3:10:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like a winner to me..Great way to go for the contest..Thanks for all the visits to my page..Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 2/2/2015 3:13:00 PM

Thanks for dropping by Sara:-) Hugs jan x

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/2/2015 2:11:00 PM

Ow gee you two were like peas and carrots : )..Hope he returns one day.He was a good cook too.. I remember his blogs about recipes..Sweet Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/2/2015 2:16:00 PM

When I lost so much weight last year he was always sending me recipes and tips to try and get my appetite back:-) Hope he returns one day I won't give up on my poetry soup soulmate returning :-) hugs jan x

Casarah Nance

Date: 2/2/2015 2:05:00 PM

Hey lady, Hugs! Your limmericks flowed nicely, made me smile to remember all the fun you guys had. Miss him much too. hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 2/2/2015 2:08:00 PM

I know Cas there is a massive void and I still don't have the heart to log onto Jadazzle United or the e mail account we share:-( Hugs jan xx

Shane Cooper

Date: 2/2/2015 1:41:00 PM

Jan it is a good Limerick and i am sure will do well in the comp. It makes me very sad for you though. Stay safe my friend and dry your eyes I know you would have shed tears while writing this. love Shane xxx

Shane Cooper
Date: 2/3/2015 4:16:00 AM

I have written a limerick on the poet who broke my heart. I do not want to post it without you reading it and saying okay. May I send it to you?

Shane Cooper
Date: 2/2/2015 2:10:00 PM

I know and understand head says one thing heart another. Just the way i am. Love Shane xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 2/2/2015 2:06:00 PM

Will be back in touch soon - got issues - dad goes back into hospice tomorrow so my heart elsewhere:-( hugs jan x

Shane Cooper
Date: 2/2/2015 1:49:00 PM

seem to have lost a bit of enthusiasm and I cannot write about which poet broke my heart. don't have the words. love Shane xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 2/2/2015 1:45:00 PM

I did find it emotional but therapeutic to write this Shane - hope you come up with a great limerick :-) Hugs jan x