To the Nines

Dressed to the nines, but with a lethal twist,
her cover blown, enacts her exit plan.
Those lips, a deep vermillion, never missed;
cotillion entrance stops hearts for a span.
A needle in the bracelet at her wrist…

With subterfuge to rival a MacBeth,
a poise belies her young and tender age.
Bare balanced on a blade ‘twixt life and death,
a china doll conceals a tiger caged.
Eyes locked on him, there’s murder on her breath.

She smiles, and with those eyes, the trap is sprung.
Embracing her, the prick is never felt.
Then pressing in, he forces past her tongue;
in mock response, she firmly clasps his belt, 
glides to a chair - one down, the night is young.

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for the THREE STANZA POEM IN QUINTAIN (SICILIAN) Poetry Contest
sponsored by Milt Hankins
written on 10/07/22
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Miller Avatar
October 31, 2022 at 1:35 AM
Excellent! So spooky and well-written, congratulations!
Bueckert Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 2:09 PM
Loved this Jeff, your ending especially. Congrats and welll deserved!!
Fowler Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 11:58 AM
Oh so dark and beautiful Jeff. Congratulations on your win! :)
Logan Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 9:26 AM
Jeff, I was pretty sure this one would make Milt's winning list. Congratulations!
Hankins Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 8:53 AM
Congratulations, Jeff, for your fine placement in my Quintain (Sicilian) contest. I thoroughly enjoyed your poem. I kept thinking of the Black Widow murders.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 2:14 AM
Oh, this is eerily spookily gothically Halloween-ish! "a china doll conceals a tiger caged." Wow! Wonderful!
Forbes Avatar
October 7, 2022 at 7:41 PM
More please... (!!!)
Tor Avatar
October 7, 2022 at 6:23 PM
Impressive words Jeff clever and dark. An exceptional entry for Milton's contest...
Logan Avatar
October 7, 2022 at 5:35 PM
She gives the term “man killer” a wicked twist.
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