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To Tell the Truth #3 I can’t compete with sheep’s behinds, their woolly butts, my only finds. My fur is itching from the heat surrounded by one hundred sheep. I can hardly take a breath. Their crushing me straight to my death. Wanting to work somewhere new, I lied about what I could do. “I’ve been a sheepdog brave and bold,” a fib I wish I’d never told. They’re turning every which a way, some backward, forward, gone astray. Help me soon or I’ll be crushed in the madness of the pasture rush! A sheepdog I am certainly not. This messed-up herd is what I’ve got. By day one’s end I felt so tired. No sheep to tend for I was fired. From now on, it's the truth I'll tell. A lie can lead you straight to Hell. 1/27/18 There is a Brighter Side #3 Given by Eve Roper

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Date: 4/21/2018 8:39:00 PM
Belated congrats on your well deserved win, Sian.
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Date: 1/28/2018 9:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Janis, great write. Thank you for entering my contest. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 1/27/2018 9:51:00 AM
Oooh damning poem Janis...
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Date: 1/27/2018 9:18:00 AM
Well delivered and so true, Janis. No good comes of lying. I particularly your first line - priceless!
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