To Paint With Worded Brush

My words – but feeble brushes
attempt to recapture
the essence of a masterpiece
in black and white lines,
to give flight to a long dormant eagle,
raise a long set sun,
scorch the soul of the horizon,
make diamonds of the dew.

To paint with worded brush
the infamy of sunrise red
setting fire to daybreak,
the purple edge of waking blue
clinging to the moonlight,
the splash of sunrise
dancing across a pond,
the sound of nature humming
as she wakes her children.

John G. Lawless
©11/9/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Calasibetta Avatar
November 28, 2021 at 1:01 PM
John, your imagery so vivid~you have 'painted' a masterpiece. Your brushes are certainly not feeble! Blessings, Paulette
George Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 8:23 AM
No doubt you can make 'diamonds of the dew'! Keep enticing us with the magic of your words!
Jayasankar Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 8:29 PM
This is a very descriptive exquisite write with great imagery painted by your words...Best wishes in the contest John...God bless...~ Ani
Buhagiar Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 10:16 AM
Brilliant metaphoric verses. No wonder you're one of the best writers here.
Mcintosh Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 7:52 AM
This is truly brilliant and glorious - a picture with words that excites and enlightens, breathes joy through the soul. God bless you always, Love, Gina ( A FAV)
Lawless Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 9:22 AM
WOW, high praise for a kid who started out with a box of 8 crayons and a no. 2 pencil.
Logan Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 2:50 AM
Your second stanza is truly wonderful, John.
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