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To Paint With Worded Brush

My words – but feeble brushes attempt to recapture the essence of a masterpiece in black and white lines, to give flight to a long dormant eagle, raise a long set sun, scorch the soul of the horizon, make diamonds of the dew. To paint with worded brush the infamy of sunrise red setting fire to daybreak, the purple edge of waking blue clinging to the moonlight, the splash of sunrise dancing across a pond, the sound of nature humming as she wakes her children. John G. Lawless ©11/9/2021

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Date: 11/28/2021 1:01:00 PM
John, your imagery so vivid~you have 'painted' a masterpiece. Your brushes are certainly not feeble! Blessings, Paulette
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Date: 11/15/2021 8:23:00 AM
No doubt you can make 'diamonds of the dew'! Keep enticing us with the magic of your words!
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Date: 11/10/2021 8:29:00 PM
This is a very descriptive exquisite write with great imagery painted by your words...Best wishes in the contest John...God bless...~ Ani
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Date: 11/10/2021 10:16:00 AM
Brilliant metaphoric verses. No wonder you're one of the best writers here.
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Date: 11/10/2021 7:52:00 AM
This is truly brilliant and glorious - a picture with words that excites and enlightens, breathes joy through the soul. God bless you always, Love, Gina ( A FAV)
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Date: 11/10/2021 9:22:00 AM
WOW, high praise for a kid who started out with a box of 8 crayons and a no. 2 pencil.
Date: 11/10/2021 2:50:00 AM
Your second stanza is truly wonderful, John.
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