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* This is me at age three, where we lived year-round on Sebago Lake in Raymond, ME. *

To Myself As a Child

There, so long ago ...
Precious little one, hair of platinum!
If I could but speak to you from the "now",
From the heart of the man you will come to be ...

Oh, you have a pure spirit there, little one,
Full of love and energy and uncommon tenderness,
(For such a wee, wobbly, skinny little lad) ...
Fascination, rife, for every particularly wonderful thing,

Like stars, the sea, and clean, white seersucker shirts, (three times-a-day).
A loving mother and older siblings to nurture you,
And a father who sacrificed all to work long hours and provide,
His sweat and varicose legs and lack of engagement

The payment for opportunities and education that so many never realize.
Yes, little one, clutch steadfast the child's heart that thrums within,
Above all else, save love, it will guide you back ...
You are a free spirit, and you will chart paths through life's thickest brush,

You will rebel away from the median, and choose poorly in emotion,
You will experience and learn and feel and gain SO much,
But you will fall even further, and lose almost all, I'm afraid ...
I can not keep you from the seams of Hell, little one, that is your destiny,

But the glimmer of love and your child's heart will wind you home,
The same heart that will crush with the pains of loss and lessons ...
But trust it always, little one ... trust it ALWAYS, 
And here you will be, looking back with wonder and gratitude ...

On a full, rich, extraordinary life.



** FOURTH PLACE in the "What Child Is This" Poetry Contest, Craig Cornish, Sponsor. **
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Hamilton Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 8:43 AM
Back with congrats on a great placement in Craig's contest, this is a special write!
Barden Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 3:36 PM
Many kind thank you's, John, and blessings to you, friend! :-)
Roper Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 6:37 PM
Wonderful write, Gregory, congratulations on your win!
Barden Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 3:36 PM
Thank you so much, Eve - I greatly appreciate that! :-)
Y. Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 3:20 PM
Hi Greg, I see why you placed so well. Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis
Barden Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 4:39 PM
That's very kind of you, Alexis, and I so appreciate it - thank you, Friend! :-) <3
White Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 12:17 PM
Awww Greg, so well deserved, this win :) Congrats.
Barden Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 4:39 PM
Thank you, Buddy, so much appreciated - I see you won as well, though I haven't got to my commenting yet today, congrats! You AND your poems are favs of mine! :-)
Daniel Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 7:44 AM
Lovely and honest, Greg:) wonderfully written, just what Craig was looking for:) that picture is really a cute one:)
Barden Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 9:05 PM
Thanks so much, Jo - I so appreciate it! Hoping you're right! :-)
White Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 2:38 AM
Greg, you were a cutie <3 Good luck in the contest with this awesome write
Barden Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 9:04 PM
Awww, thanks so much, Buddy - much appreciated! :-)
Hamilton Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 4:18 PM
Such a nice letter to self, I found this piece to be very honest in it's awareness of self, and lessons learned through a lifetime. You have a special talent Greg, this should do well in the contest!
Barden Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 9:03 PM
So kind of you, Buddy, and I so appreciate it - glad you enjoyed it! :-)
Teagan Avatar
October 15, 2017 at 3:07 PM
This is awesome, Greg! You did an great job with this.
Barden Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 12:34 PM
Awww ... thank you so much - now I'll have to send you flowers! ;-) <3
Barden Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 12:33 PM
Thank you so much, Becca, I greatly appreciate the kind words, and I'm pleased you liked this one! :-)
Teagan Avatar
October 15, 2017 at 3:09 PM
ps you're such a cutie!!! (you were back then, too lol)
Dietrich Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 5:55 PM
Oh, this is SO nice, Gregory, and to know what you said, that the glimmer of love and child's heart will wind you home. That is wonderful!!!
Barden Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 8:45 PM
Blessings for your kindness, Andrea, that's so nice of you to say! Thank you so much! :-)
Onclaud Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 3:00 PM
so in touch with your inner child, greg...how splendid can this be; i go wow!... huggs
Barden Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 8:45 PM
Yes, it's called "immature", Nette, (or foolish, as my mom would say, lol), and I make no excuses - I'm thankful for it, even if it does make me seem a bit childish at times, lol. So pleased you liked my poem, my friend - thanks so much for the sweetness! :-) <3
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October 14, 2017 at 10:40 AM
What a tender letter to the little you Greg, a testament to the wisdom you have gained in this sweet life. A wonderful entry for this contest, my best to you dear poet :) xomo!
Barden Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 8:39 PM
Thank you so very much, Xomo, that's very sweet of you, my friend - I greatly appreciate your kindness! :-) <3
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