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To My Younger Son With Love

(I have two sons- late arrivals after long years of waiting. My elder son left home for his studies relatively at a young age. My younger son was with us until he left for his medical school. When he too left, we felt quite lonely. This poem was written some years back soon after his leaving home. Now he is a doctor. I mean every word of what I have written about him. He is such a joy.) My son, to us, you’re so very special For reasons not just one or two! But when you announced your arrival first At an unexpected time and age- Was it with joy or fear, still not so sure That I first felt the faint stirrings of life inside Sure, when you barged in more like a late night guest You gifted us with a mixed pack After eight months of anxious wait When you showed up a little earlier than due With a clear shriek and a piercing cry All our fears vanished, all anxiety fled Like a cute little kitten with eyes shut You slept peacefully day and night Refusing to suck your mother’s breast That again put your mom in severe stress You never threw any tantrums wild As all other babies usually do Pleasantly gentle with a chuckling smile You were a spring flower, come alive You readily accepted the cast away stuff; Broken toys and milk stained bib, Faded clothes and the little crib, Used recklessly by your naughty brother You never gave us any stress or pain Even in days of adolescent strain You were ever gentle and ready to mingle With eyes lit up with a delectable twinkle You are endowed with a loving heart When we are glum, you are by our side Your compassion, care and abiding love Are truly gifts, God has blessed you with You knew every nook and corner of the house Where each little thing placed and kept If something was amiss inside the house You would run as by a click and get it quick When you left for studies, miles away The house looked empty like an abandoned nest With no more songs in early dawn Until once in a while you returned to give it a tilt Time will fly and you’ll be grown An adult, ready to steer into your world But you are the reason that keeps us young And give our tired legs an unusual spring You lit our yesterdays with hopes for tomorrow And even after your hairline recedes Even after you become man and Dad You remain once and ever our 'cute baby' dear! March.8.2023 For You, Love Poetry Contest Sponsor- Regina McIntosh

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Date: 3/8/2023 8:49:00 PM
A beautiful poem for your son, Valsa, he must be proud of this one:) your love shines through:)
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Valsa George
Date: 3/8/2023 9:32:00 PM
Yes, he has framed it and kept it in his room. When I first read it out to him, he hugged me tight with his usual sprightly smile. Thanks a lot dear Jo
Date: 3/8/2023 6:42:00 AM
Valsa, I can sense the pride and happiness that you exude. He has such a charming character. I can relate to everything of what you made with profound emotions and stunning love since it came from the loving heart of a mother. You must feel an immense sense of pride, the same emotion that welled up within me when my son received his master's degree in engineering and when my daughter received her doctorate in pharmacy. This is Fave for its beauty.
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Valsa George
Date: 3/8/2023 8:40:00 AM
Thanks a lot dear Lasaad. Glad to know more about your children and family. You can be proud that your children are academically well qualified. My elder son is a Post graduate in Entertainment Law and is working in a law firm. I am proud not because they are well placed, but because they are well behaved, amiable and gentle. I see it as God's blessing only !
Date: 3/8/2023 6:17:00 AM
Great dedication to your son, how proud you must be, our second son also showed up at 8 months we were worried but all was fine, love your poem to express love for your "cute baby" dear, May they bring you many grandbabies, : )
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Date: 3/8/2023 8:34:00 AM
Thanks a lot Stephan ! So your second son too was slightly premature like my son. At birth he weighed very low. Now he has grown into a moderately well built man with reasonable health. I am going to be a grandma. My daughter in law- elder son's wife is three month's pregnant. They are staying in another state,. Soon we will be visiting hthem and I will take a short break from poetry soup from 17th March.
Date: 3/8/2023 5:31:00 AM
Straight from a mother's loving heart. I feel the pride and joy you convey. He sounds adorable. You are blessed my friend. Best to you.
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Valsa George
Date: 3/8/2023 8:26:00 AM
To be frank I too feel that I am blessed with well behaved children who love and respect their parents and others.... ! Thanks a lot Vijay !
Date: 3/8/2023 3:38:00 AM
- Lovingly written to your son, Valsa - A beautiful poem - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
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Valsa George
Date: 3/8/2023 8:23:00 AM
Thank you for your appreciation of the poem dear Smile.
Date: 3/8/2023 1:38:00 AM
What a cute biography for your child. Excellent in every way. Hugs
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Valsa George
Date: 3/8/2023 8:23:00 AM
Thank you so much Victor. Children are our most treasured assets.
Date: 3/7/2023 11:15:00 PM
I was carried away reading about your love for you son Valsa, lovely!
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Valsa George
Date: 3/8/2023 8:21:00 AM
Like any mother who loves her child, I too love my son. But his special nature makes him more lovable. Thank yu so much Dilly.

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