To My Younger Son With Love

(I have two sons- late arrivals after long years of waiting. My elder son left home for his studies relatively at a young age. My younger son was with us until he left for his medical school. When he too left, we felt quite lonely. This poem was written some years back soon after his leaving home. Now he is a doctor. I mean every word of what I have written about him. He is such a joy.)

My son, to us, you’re so very special
For reasons not just one or two!
But when you announced your arrival first
At an unexpected time and age-
Was it with joy or fear, still not so sure
That I first felt the faint stirrings of life inside
Sure, when you barged in more like a late night guest
You gifted us with a mixed pack

After eight months of anxious wait
When you showed up a little earlier than due
With a clear shriek and a piercing cry
All our fears vanished, all anxiety fled
Like a cute little kitten with eyes shut
You slept peacefully day and night
Refusing to suck your mother’s breast
That again put your mom in severe stress

You never threw any tantrums wild
As all other babies usually do
Pleasantly gentle with a chuckling smile
You were a spring flower, come alive
You readily accepted the cast away stuff;
Broken toys and milk stained bib,
Faded clothes and the little crib,
Used recklessly by your naughty brother

You never gave us any stress or pain
Even in days of adolescent strain
You were ever gentle and ready to mingle
With eyes lit up with a delectable twinkle
You are endowed with a loving heart
When we are glum, you are by our side
Your compassion, care and abiding love
Are truly gifts, God has blessed you with

You knew every nook and corner of the house
Where each little thing placed and kept
If something was amiss inside the house
You would run as by a click and get it quick
When you left for studies, miles away
The house looked empty like an abandoned nest
With no more songs in early dawn
Until once in a while you returned to give it a tilt 

Time will fly and you’ll be grown
An adult, ready to steer into your world
But you are the reason that keeps us young
And give our tired legs an unusual spring
You lit our yesterdays with hopes for tomorrow
And even after your hairline recedes
Even after you become man and Dad
You remain once and ever our 'cute baby' dear!

March.8.2023
For You, Love Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Regina McIntosh

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Date: 3/8/2023 8:49:00 PM
A beautiful poem for your son, Valsa, he must be proud of this one:) your love shines through:)
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Valsa George
Date: 3/8/2023 9:32:00 PM
Yes, he has framed it and kept it in his room. When I first read it out to him, he hugged me tight with his usual sprightly smile. Thanks a lot dear Jo
Date: 3/8/2023 6:42:00 AM
Valsa, I can sense the pride and happiness that you exude. He has such a charming character. I can relate to everything of what you made with profound emotions and stunning love since it came from the loving heart of a mother. You must feel an immense sense of pride, the same emotion that welled up within me when my son received his master's degree in engineering and when my daughter received her doctorate in pharmacy. This is Fave for its beauty.
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Valsa George
Date: 3/8/2023 8:40:00 AM
Thanks a lot dear Lasaad. Glad to know more about your children and family. You can be proud that your children are academically well qualified. My elder son is a Post graduate in Entertainment Law and is working in a law firm. I am proud not because they are well placed, but because they are well behaved, amiable and gentle. I see it as God's blessing only !
Date: 3/8/2023 6:17:00 AM
Great dedication to your son, how proud you must be, our second son also showed up at 8 months we were worried but all was fine, love your poem to express love for your "cute baby" dear, May they bring you many grandbabies, : )
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Valsa George
Date: 3/8/2023 8:34:00 AM
Thanks a lot Stephan ! So your second son too was slightly premature like my son. At birth he weighed very low. Now he has grown into a moderately well built man with reasonable health. I am going to be a grandma. My daughter in law- elder son's wife is three month's pregnant. They are staying in another state,. Soon we will be visiting hthem and I will take a short break from poetry soup from 17th March.
Date: 3/8/2023 5:31:00 AM
Straight from a mother's loving heart. I feel the pride and joy you convey. He sounds adorable. You are blessed my friend. Best to you.
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Valsa George
Date: 3/8/2023 8:26:00 AM
To be frank I too feel that I am blessed with well behaved children who love and respect their parents and others.... ! Thanks a lot Vijay !
Date: 3/8/2023 3:38:00 AM
- Lovingly written to your son, Valsa - A beautiful poem - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
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Valsa George
Date: 3/8/2023 8:23:00 AM
Thank you for your appreciation of the poem dear Smile.
Date: 3/8/2023 1:38:00 AM
What a cute biography for your child. Excellent in every way. Hugs
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Valsa George
Date: 3/8/2023 8:23:00 AM
Thank you so much Victor. Children are our most treasured assets.
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