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To My Shame

As he approached me, I pretended not to see him He was very thin, a shell of a man Had snot running out his nose Wore raggedy rain showered, sun dried clothes His body bear the stench of places God only knows And as we passed each other, I averted my eyes Cowardly, I didn't want to see the abject sadness in his eyes To my shame, I offered not even a polite hello ... nothing personal to acknowledge his existence To my shame, I wondered not what was his name Didn't want to come in contact with his pain This frail man wore a wrinkled face of a thousand slights He had sunken, hollow eyes: haunting optical illusions of countless lonesome nights No doubt, he slept in places where many unrealized hopes had died Abandoned dreams ... empty houses on a desolated street of discarded destinies To my shame, I extended no small kindness to alleviate his personal pain I was sore afraid that I was looking at my future self, and someone else was treating me the same

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/7/2017 1:21:00 PM
I can relate to that.... nicely done
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Date: 4/4/2017 5:35:00 PM
You have written a guiltily expressive poem, Freddie. I am sure there are many who can relate to such situations. Most of these homeless people need help and understanding, though some are too proud to accept any. #7 Regards // paul
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Date: 4/3/2017 1:58:00 PM
It seems life is filled with situations just as you have described my friend, where a simple act of kindness, a hello is more difficult than looking away pretending not to see. This one was deep in emotional value Freddie and will make me think twice when faced with the same thing.
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Date: 4/3/2017 1:30:00 PM
Penetrating write Freddie. Funny I do often meet eyes and smile with the downtrodden for much the same reason :) xomo
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Date: 4/3/2017 11:26:00 AM
So sad Freddie with such real images and feelings !
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