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To My Loving Dear

Mother's Day is almost here,  
this is for my wonderful ~ loving dear.  
You work from sun up ~ sun down,  
as we act like a clown.  
You deserve dinner out and a cold beer.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/21/2023 11:22:00 AM

To My Loving Dear Date Written: 4/28/2023 Note: I do not drink but I needed beer for my write......

Bill Baker

Date: 6/5/2023 4:12:00 PM

Cute Limerick, Paula. You made me smile ... good form. Blessings, Bill

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/6/2023 4:28:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed my cute Limerick and it made you smile. Smiles are free. Have a great/blessed day................

Len Gasun

Date: 5/8/2023 1:40:00 AM

Passing by to enjoy this once more and leave lots of loving smiles my dear poet friend. My best wishes always. Hugs...hugs. God bless you, your mom and loved ones always

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/8/2023 9:10:00 AM

Thanks for your visit. Always good to see you here. Glad you enjoyed my fun limerick write again. I love to give out smiles. Here is a smile~Catch It... Hugs.. Have a great day/week.....................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/3/2023 12:39:00 PM

This is quite cute. If it's for any contest, check for consistent syllables.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/4/2023 10:12:00 AM

Thanks for your visit. Glad you enjoyed my fun limerick write. Have a great day.....................

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/1/2023 3:52:00 PM

I'm not a fan of beer either, but I liked how you used it in your limerick - gl in the contest~

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/3/2023 12:18:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and for you good luck. Glad you enjoyed my fun limerick write. Have a great day.....................

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/30/2023 3:36:00 PM

Paula, that was a pretty amusing limerick. And a lovely tribute as well. Hugs and best wishes to you.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/1/2023 7:59:00 AM

Thanks for your visit and for you best wishes. Glad you enjoyed my limerick/tribute write for Mother's Day. Have a great day/week.....................

Jan Allison

Date: 4/30/2023 1:08:00 PM

what a fun poem Paula, we celebrated Mother's day in March, it was hard for me - my first without mum:-( hugs Jan xx

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/30/2023 1:51:00 PM

Thanks for your visit. So very sorry about your mother. Glad you enjoyed this fun write. Many years ago, a few months before Mother's Day my mother died. In the store I stood at the cards crying. I wanted to buy a card but knew I could not. It was so painful. Hugs... Have a great weekend........................

Len Gasun

Date: 4/30/2023 5:43:00 AM

One of the best gifts to our parents is to make them laugh or smile with our sweet and loving words my dear poet friend Paula. This delightful, awesome and jolly poem is a precious gift. I love it and enjoyed a lot making me smile too. Thanks a lot for sharing. BEst wishes always my dear friend. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/30/2023 12:09:00 PM

Thanks for your visit. Good to see you here. Glad you love this fun write. I love to give out smiles. Smiles are free. Give one away. Hugs... Have a great weekend........................

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/29/2023 2:50:00 PM

They are the rock of every family, a lovely tribute Paula. Tom

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/30/2023 12:04:00 PM

Thanks for your visit. Good to see you here. Glad you enjoyed my fun/tribute write for Mother's Day. I hope you are OK. Have a great weekend........................

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/29/2023 7:58:00 AM

Well, if beer will give you the rhyme, use it. LOL..Enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/29/2023 12:48:00 PM

Thanks for your visit. Good to see you here. Glad you enjoyed my fun write. I do not drink but I needed beer for my write/rhyme. Have a great weekend........................

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/29/2023 6:02:00 AM

Straight from the heart--beautiful poem, Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/29/2023 12:47:00 PM

Thanks for your visit. Good to see you here. Glad you found my write to be beautiful. Have a great weekend........................

Paul Callus

Date: 4/29/2023 1:16:00 AM

You are a poet, Paula, and as such a holder of poetic license :) so let us raise a glass to all mothers who deserve this special title. ~ Best regards // paul

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/29/2023 12:44:00 PM

Thanks for your visit. Good to see you here. Glad you enjoyed my write. Yes, let's raise a glass to all mothers who deserve this special day/title. Even if it is a glass of soda. Have a great weekend........................

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 4/28/2023 8:39:00 PM

Lovely Paula, every loving dear deserves some cheer, dinner with or without beer… Belle

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/29/2023 12:40:00 PM

Thanks for your visit. Good to see you here. Yes, on Mother's Day we need some cheer/dinner~~with/without beer. I needed a rhyme so I used beer to make it work. I do not drink beer. Glad you like my fun write. Have a great weekend........................

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 4/28/2023 6:53:00 PM

A very nicely done limerick, that brings smiles. Blessings. :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/29/2023 12:35:00 PM

Thanks for your visit. Good to see you here. Glad you like my fun limerick write. If it brings smiles to you then it puts a smile on my heart. I love to give out smiles. Have a great weekend........................

Lin Lane

Date: 4/28/2023 2:20:00 PM

No matter what's served for dinner, it's being together that counts. Sweet thoughts, Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/29/2023 12:31:00 PM

Thanks for your visit. Good to see you here. Yes, being together is what counts. Glad you enjoyed my write. Have a great weekend........................

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/28/2023 1:25:00 PM

Hi Paula, This is a good one. Best wishes in the contest. Have a good day and weekend;-) Alexis

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/29/2023 12:29:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and for your best wishes. Good to see you here. Glad you like my fun write. Have a great weekend.............

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/28/2023 1:08:00 PM

- She deserves the best, Paula ... lovely :) - Luck in the contest and happy weekend :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/29/2023 12:27:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and for your luck. Good to see you here. Glad you enjoyed my write. Yes, she deserves the very best Mother's Day. Hugs... Have a great weekend........................

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