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To My Beautiful Daughter

shine on, my brightest star, may you find your beauty from afar- enriched in serenity, you bring such ease, you’ll never know how lovely you are, as all my sorrow did cease. shine on, my constellation, may you find peace in thy creation- bound by blood are we my sweetest girl, for you have brought me alleviation, you are my entire world. March 2, 2018

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Date: 3/15/2018 1:12:00 PM
Great tribute to your daughter. Wonderfully written. Nice rhythm and flow.
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Date: 3/4/2018 4:08:00 PM
Mother's love is strongest of all. May you bask forevermore Laura, in that shining starlight.
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Date: 3/2/2018 7:39:00 PM
I felt this one in my heart, Laura! What a lovely tribute to your daughter, and one that I hope you print for her to keep forever. She should always know how much she is loved :)
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Date: 3/3/2018 2:25:00 PM
I think she knows :) She's an only child lol sassy yet compassionate little girl is she! thanks sweet Carrie :)-luloo
Date: 3/2/2018 6:11:00 PM
Lovely, Laura. Beautifully heartfelt.
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Date: 3/3/2018 2:25:00 PM
thank you! ;)-luloo

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