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When the last rain drop has fallen and final word has been spoken. When mercy is no longer our saviour, remember, each time your heart beats, with every sigh on the tip of your tongue, my only wish was to forever love you, stronger than the light that shone at sunrise, warmer than the rays from that golden orb, more powerful than the radiance of the moon and with greater devotion than the stars.
Silent One Simple Musing 17 February 2018

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Date: 3/15/2018 9:44:00 PM
I wish someone will read this to me, "My only wish was to forever love you"... takes my breath away! I read this like three times just because it's expressively beautiful. Totally love it!
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Date: 3/8/2018 9:11:00 AM
True word of real love, passion in your poem , your guy is a lucky man
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Date: 2/28/2018 6:52:00 AM
" when mercy is no longer our saviour " such a beautiful line it is, I enjoyed each and every line of this beautiful poem, good luck
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Date: 2/26/2018 8:06:00 AM
so much said in such few words, beautifully expressed! :)-lulooo
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Date: 2/26/2018 7:37:00 AM
Hi SI : Exquisite ! I love the title and the line, ‘my only wish was to forever love you’ Into my favs. SuZ
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Date: 2/24/2018 1:09:00 PM
Wonderful walk on path of Love Blessing always
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Date: 2/22/2018 2:42:00 PM
This felt like the final slow dance with both love & pain. Wonderful.
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Date: 2/21/2018 7:40:00 PM
Oh, this is very nice. Reminds me of my Belladonna poem. Thank you for coming to read my Home :) Yup, my mom feels like Home :)
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Date: 2/21/2018 3:32:00 PM
Succinct and sublime all at the same time!
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Date: 2/21/2018 1:38:00 PM
When mercy is no longer our saviour...greater devotion than the stars...yeah I like it, could quote the whole thing, love it all!
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Date: 2/20/2018 6:53:00 PM
Oh to have a lifetime love like that...
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Date: 2/19/2018 9:07:00 AM
Very nice Silent One :)
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Date: 2/18/2018 10:24:00 PM
"my only wish was to forever love you ..." so beautiful and so romantic.
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Date: 2/18/2018 6:19:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful love poem. I feel a sadness to it too. So expressive!
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Date: 2/18/2018 8:37:00 AM
Superb use of similes, S.O.! Janice
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Date: 2/18/2018 8:22:00 AM
Such beauty in these words. You have expressed the true definition of true love here.
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Date: 2/18/2018 6:01:00 AM
Romantic words indeed Si. You excel in this. I'm sure you think and dream in poetry. A truly gifted poet. I love this poem...Maria
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Date: 2/17/2018 9:34:00 PM
Anybody's desire to acquire such love and if we put ego aside we would find it...but the material world holds us hostage! Sunita :)
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Date: 2/17/2018 9:28:00 PM
A deep expression of luminous love Silent One. Superb poetry!
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Date: 2/17/2018 8:31:00 PM
If music is the food of love, then poetry is its instructions! You've cracked it Silence!
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Date: 2/17/2018 7:12:00 PM
Love of cosmic proportions painted by poetry sublime dear, S.O.!
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Date: 2/17/2018 6:31:00 PM
What a tender, tender poem!
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Date: 2/17/2018 4:44:00 PM
GREAT POETRY MY FRIEND. I wish that I could write more often such positive verses instead of my many dark one lately... A fav....
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Date: 2/17/2018 4:14:00 PM
Simply beautiful Silent One!!!
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Date: 2/17/2018 2:38:00 PM
- It can not be described more beautifully than this, S.O. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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