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To Lighten the Load

A self-learned means I follow Though I am not god Apollo; To those who approach me with ills, Of psychic nature those slow-kills... I talk less; make them to pour out, All in their hearts; that turn them lout; Within deepest oceans of pain, That they might soon true freedom gain... They go back optimism-lighted. I remain amply delighted. My work, though, visibly too small, Lightens loads; saves many from fall...! 09 May 2022 To lighten the load Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Angela Tune

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Date: 5/12/2022 1:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Keep up the good work!
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Date: 5/12/2022 8:16:00 AM
You do good work, Alex! A lot of people hurting these days. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/9/2022 7:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. Have a great/blessed day..............
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Date: 5/9/2022 5:50:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... so wisdom-filled. God bless you.
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Date: 5/9/2022 5:18:00 AM
Lending an attentive ear and encouraging to open up lessens the load of many. Powerful strategy. Congratulations Chris for your well deserved win !
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Date: 5/9/2022 4:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your shining win and this beautifully uplifting poem! Thanks for sharing my dear friend Christuraj. Blessings. Hugs
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