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To Karin: Brandenburg Gate

Like some dark frail bird
she quivered and fluttered
there at my door
one dark cold Advent night,
swearing to return
come the new year
with a photo of Brandenburg Gate.

Arms, hands, fingertips, eyes,
then nothing between us
but electrified space –
her light tread descending the steps –
my heart drawn downward
by the diminishing sound.

Sometimes still my heart is snared
between winter
a swirling hem
and Brandenburg Gate
and I write a letter
which will never be mailed 
to Karin.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 5/26/2025 9:00:00 PM
This is such a strong piece... My heart aches at the last line, at the letter wrote and just resting there, never delivered. Beautiful and emotional work, thank you for posting it.
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Roxanne Andorfer
Date: 5/27/2025 2:58:00 AM
Thank you, Jasmine! Karin had a big impact on me, as you may have guessed by the fact that I've written four poems about her.

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