Punnia Viswan Bhatia Poet Free verse

To He Who Asked Me Why Do I Think Deep

To he who asked me why do I think deep:
Thoughts pile up
One over the other
Forming guarding angels at times of despair
Forming misguiding demons at times of pleasure
Irony, I know, but this is the wisdom
The vision
Be it in the party or
In the gore
What I love is to write it off
Dancing with the rhythm of words
Crying off the agony 
Being lost in the ecstasy

Know my friend
There is a way out and
A different way in
Thoughts pile up
One over the other
I make my banquet ready!

-puvi-
(24/10/2015)

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Robert Lindley November 15, 2015 at 12:58 PM OK, you hooked me with this one. Tis' deep enough to stir my interest and call me to check out your future creations..A7 Punnia Viswan Bhatia November 15, 2015 at 9:05 PM hahahahaha..Thank you Robert for your time and a sweet comment :)) God Bless...and thank you very much for a wonderful 7 :)

Arthur Vaso November 15, 2015 at 1:09 AM Really enjoyed this poem! Deep! Punnia Viswan Bhatia November 15, 2015 at 8:54 AM thank you Arthur for stopping by and leaving a comment :) God Bless :*

Red Barchettadrive November 2, 2015 at 12:14 AM Nice work & reason! Punnia Viswan Bhatia November 2, 2015 at 1:09 AM Thank you red...stay blessed :))

Liam Mcdaid October 24, 2015 at 1:53 PM beautifully crafted piece excellent pen Punnia Viswan Bhatia October 24, 2015 at 8:51 PM WOW....thank you liam :) I feel special...Love, peace & happiness to you my friend

Lin Lane October 24, 2015 at 8:33 AM I really like the way you penned your thoughts. Our mind and heart capture them, and they do have a way of becoming layered. I also think you have a great way of expressing the way in and out. Some we'd like to keep, and then some can't leave us quickly enough. Well done...Remnants...love your name. Punnia Viswan Bhatia October 24, 2015 at 8:51 AM Thank you so much for your time in reading my work Lin :) God Bless you. love, peace and happiness to you my friend :) <3