To He Who Asked Me Why Do I Think Deep

To he who asked me why do I think deep:
Thoughts pile up
One over the other
Forming guarding angels at times of despair
Forming misguiding demons at times of pleasure
Irony, I know, but this is the wisdom
The vision
Be it in the party or
In the gore
What I love is to write it off
Dancing with the rhythm of words
Crying off the agony 
Being lost in the ecstasy

Know my friend
There is a way out and
A different way in
Thoughts pile up
One over the other
I make my banquet ready!

-puvi-
(24/10/2015)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/15/2015 12:58:00 PM
OK, you hooked me with this one. Tis' deep enough to stir my interest and call me to check out your future creations..A7
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 11/15/2015 9:05:00 PM
hahahahaha..Thank you Robert for your time and a sweet comment :)) God Bless...and thank you very much for a wonderful 7 :)
Date: 11/15/2015 1:09:00 AM
Really enjoyed this poem! Deep!
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 11/15/2015 8:54:00 AM
thank you Arthur for stopping by and leaving a comment :) God Bless :*
Date: 11/2/2015 12:14:00 AM
Nice work & reason!
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 11/2/2015 1:09:00 AM
Thank you red...stay blessed :))
Date: 10/24/2015 1:53:00 PM
beautifully crafted piece excellent pen
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 10/24/2015 8:51:00 PM
WOW....thank you liam :) I feel special...Love, peace & happiness to you my friend
Date: 10/24/2015 8:33:00 AM
I really like the way you penned your thoughts. Our mind and heart capture them, and they do have a way of becoming layered. I also think you have a great way of expressing the way in and out. Some we'd like to keep, and then some can't leave us quickly enough. Well done...Remnants...love your name.
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 10/24/2015 8:51:00 AM
Thank you so much for your time in reading my work Lin :) God Bless you. love, peace and happiness to you my friend :) <3
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