To Forgive Or Not To Forgive

To forgive or not to forgive, that is the question.
When you are offended, whether real or imagined
by a loved one, a friend, or by someone esteemed,
do you confront the other, or resolve to be patient?

If by some stroke of luck, the offender apologized
but turns around, talking glib gobbledygook,
do you keep silent and still, looking cool as ice,
or do you tell it to his face, that he’s more than a crook?

At such time as this, or any time for that matter,
it is best to forgive whether he asks for it or not.
Do not poison your heart with cyanide blather;
bitterness can bother like a bat’s up your butt!

Forgiveness frees the offended from the devil’s deceit;
and makes you smile at the debtor, as his debt, you forfeit.



*First line draws on Hamlet's soliloquy, Act III, Scene 1; W. Shakespeare

A modern sonnet.  
06 October 2015
Poem of the Week - October 11 to 17, 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Mack Oms Dd Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 6:08 PM
Kim you have touched my heart very, very deeply with your wonderful words as many of your poems I have read I have I have found tears of love in which I send across the heavens for God to touch on there way to you and to say never give up and never surender you love of God you are a very, very welcome writer for God and you have the true passion and love to shear His wisdom God's blessings lots of love and prayers to you always
Romaine Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 12:14 PM
Hey Kim, a warm and hearty congratulations on your winning poem in the Screwed 7 contest! I knew it should have won when I first read it. So glad Rob saw the excellent writing and expression. Be Blessed, Neva
A  Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 12:10 PM
Kim, congrats on your win in Rob Carmack's contest. SKAT
A. Sharma Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 10:16 PM
Congrats on huge win Kim with this superb write!
Nunez Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 9:57 AM
Thank you, Dr. Upma. It is not a huge win, however, but I don't question the sponsor's judgment. hugs!
Allison Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 10:42 AM
many congrats on your win Kim :-) hugs jan xx
Allison Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 11:33 AM
Just posted it wrote it in Malta about 4 days ago:-( hugs jan xx
Hamilton Avatar
October 29, 2015 at 10:18 AM
Congrats on a great work. Maybe you would like mine Turn the page, similar sentiments, although not the same quality.
Lander Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 6:58 AM
congratulation ..
Raha Avatar
October 16, 2015 at 1:19 PM
Congrats Kim for POW,This begs for a lesson for all of us.
Konos Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 2:12 PM
Congratulations on Poem Of The Week...
Romaine Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 10:29 AM
Hey Kim, a warm and hearty congratulations on your poem being chosen for POTW!! A well needed lesson for us all to remember. Excellent writing and best wishes in the contest!! Be Blessed, Neva
Neels Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 12:04 PM
Awesome write Kim, congratulations on POTW, well deserved ;) *hugs*
Zubair Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 9:23 AM
Congratulations on your win
La France Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 9:31 AM
Kim, a big congratulations on having this amazing poem selected as Poem Of The Week, enjoy the honor ...
Nance Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 8:09 AM
Grats on poem of the week! Wonderfully done!
Bateman Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 12:49 PM
Hello Kim, Congratulations on POTW!! I think you would've captured Shakespeare's heart for sure with your first verse, and the rest of this wonderful sonnet. Brilliant Work. 7 + FAV in my book!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Konos Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 10:43 AM
loving it....as his debt, you forfeit...brilliant
Lamoureux Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 9:36 AM
All I can say is BRILLIANT! Congratulations Kim.
Y. Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 6:36 AM
Kim, you have penned words we all should live by. Great job! Congratulations on getting the poem of the week it was well deserved. Enjoy the honor:-) Alexis
Scars Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 7:47 PM
Great job! I love the flow you carry :) I will read some other poems of yours tonight :) -LU
Muideen Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 7:13 AM
I read your many times KIM, a fascinating write like this worth a FAV..........A.M.
Nunez Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 3:32 PM
Wow...been a long times since another poet came back for another read and to fav. Thanks, AM!
Muideen Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 7:08 AM
Your write is indeed a great and write worthy of praise KIM.....an extreme brilliant write that swims eloquent within the readers mind and sense, this makes a flame of forgiveness to spread through their mind....a light and lovely write....brilliant one.........A.M.
Muideen Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 7:09 AM
Flam of forgiving!
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 5:45 AM
Pride gets in the way of forgiving. Your poem expresses the virtues of forgiving, even when the person has too much pride to ask for fogivness. There is a lot of wisdom in this excellent piece Kim.
Smith Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 3:57 PM
I always like to forgive and hope others can forgive me. No one is perfect in this world. Not even me : )
Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 3:52 PM
you said you have yet to see a sonnet that uses levity in a serious situation. Haha. I have several like that. Glad I came back here to see you had posted me a message.
Nunez Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 3:29 PM
Hi Andie! I'm afraid I got home late and got tangled in the business of subbing for Jack Ellison who's out of commission. Will visit tomorrow instead...PS. Pulled JIM THE TRIM from hiding for Jack...
Lamoureux Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 7:56 AM
I agree, go the forgiveness route!
Nunez Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 3:26 PM
Thanks, Rick!
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