To Erase Or Not To Erase?

Perchance, if I could parts of life erase,
by careful choice select the times to keep,
I’d treasure love’s long walks on sunny days,
and cast aside the shade where I did weep
upon the morn you closed your eyes to mine,
forsaking me to chase a wanton breeze;
negate the lapse between my heart and thine,
to hold the nights we lay entwined with ease.

If this eraser I should choose to wield,
to moor thy heart and gently clip thy wing,
I ask, in time, would wretched fate be sealed,
as I, unmeant, forbade thy soul to sing?

Speak fondly to me from thy heart’s refrain,
that I may know my love was ne’er in vain.


*** for 'Rub it Out' contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Holmes Avatar
June 22, 2010 at 8:51 AM
Verily thy words are moving indeed.
Brown Avatar
June 7, 2010 at 6:09 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Paula's contest Sharon. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 11:58 AM
VERY very nice sonnet. Love to see sonnets scoring high in contests! I want a sonnet revival in this world!! Congratulations. YOu sure came up with an unique way to speak of earsers! Luv, Andrea
Fraser Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 5:26 AM
Blissful, delightful, wantful and simply beautiful Sharon. I so enjoy reading your poetry >> James
Brown Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 4:22 AM
Congratulations !! Thank you for sharing your winning poetry with us Sharon. I enjoyed reading it this morning. Hope you have a wonderful weekend running over with inspiration. Love, Carol
K. Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 8:17 PM
Hi Sharon! Reading this, I can't help but smile, thinking of just how really talented you are, writing about an eraser in a sonnet in such an eloquent manner is just so you! Bravo for this one & congrats on the win :)--nikko :)
Green Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 6:45 PM
Beautiful, congrats on your win!
Mehta Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 5:18 PM
Congrats on your 2nd place win
Johnson Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 4:13 PM
This beautiful You have true talent. Congratulations on your win. Well deserved. Love, Joyce
Richards Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 4:06 PM
This is beautiful, Sharon. Your talent shines, the more I read your poems. Congratulations! ~ Carrie
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June 4, 2010 at 3:07 PM
Big congrats Sharon on your 2nd place win in Paula's Eraser contest with this outstanding poem.. enjoy a victory dance please.. luv.. from the "Sweetheart" of P.S.. Linda-Marie..
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June 4, 2010 at 12:21 PM
Beautiful sonnet, Sharon. If only we could erase the painful times and live only with happy memories. The line about forbidding a soul to sing was especially powerful. Love should never inhibit our expressions of joy, but sometimes it does. Great entry for "rub it out." Love, Carolyn
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