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for Edward Ibehs "To dust " contest ~ 

Premiere Contest Winner To Dust

I read the burn to hand-feed
the dark with pills of pleasure ~
twilight entombed
within troubled walls,
swollen and sore,
throbbing with ache,
an insatiable appetite
to relish the realism
of your silhouette of sapience,
a breathing poem
with metaphors in motion,
meticulously merged
with the musk of euphoric musings…

O bronco wild, white force,
the bona fide heat
heaving in bedazzled breeze
around the fragile fingers
of my unclothed heart.
Walk me out of the devious
doors of demented dreams;
free-flow me to a realm
of quenching quiescence,
where condemnatory pupils
do not imprison
the tongue that savors
the flavor of foreverness,
with everlasting vapors
of pulsing peridots
staining these panopticon lips,
sealed with softly sewn secrets.
Serve me your sanguine silk…

They do not sympathize
with the bleeding thorns
painfully wanting ~
sleeplessly yearning
to trace the honest waves,
catalyzing the spark
awaiting escape,
away from the cross-eyed fables
fabricating the fragrance
of my zealous love ~
your rose lady,
restless to bloom as one,
rooted to the runes written
across your ambidextrous armor.

I am tattered and torn,
stuck in a scrutinized cycle,
yet still I refuse
to let these petals wilt.
I let my thoughts wander
to the waking wilderness,
where gypsy blossoms
caress and nurture
the penetrating luster
of pearl-light sepals,
resembling my damask spirit,
unstained by the sepulchral ashes ~
dust-laden, kohl-corpse chains
of faithless society,
of blood serpents
masking malevolence,
pretending to be well-wishers…

I care not for their callous clamors,
cruelty caved
in charismatic lies,
deciphering my virtuous dawn
as dangerous delirium;
so take me away ~
to flawless fields
bathed in orange topaz skies…

~ I am yours to worship,
               your masterpiece of paradise ~ 

***Inspired by the artwork; The Lady Rose, by Paul Delvaux
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Ibeh Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 6:37 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest, Inky🙌 Of course, this is an absolute masterpiece of a poem. I never expect anything less than from you. A fave.
Dietrich Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 12:46 AM
This is at top of best new 100 poems list. Way to go. Soupmail too
Borg Avatar
July 28, 2026 at 3:08 PM
You could not write a poem less beautiful if you tried, Ink. Congrats on yet another win.
Borg Avatar
July 28, 2026 at 3:02 PM
MITRA Avatar
July 25, 2026 at 1:29 AM
Congratulations, Queen of Quills, on a triumph richly deserved. I often muse how you spread the Ink to create unprecedented shades without blotting even the minutest jot. Among the many luxuriant images, "yet still I refuse to let these petals wilt" stood out as the poem's indomitable heartbeat—where vulnerability flowers into quiet defiance. Your diction never merely adorns; it breathes, burns, and blossoms with an almost alchemical grace, carrying every image towards an ending that feels wholly earned. A magnificent ekphrastic achievement and a worthy Premiere Contest winner. Bravo, IE.
Sharma  Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 1:09 AM
Wow! Congratulations on the beautiful win my dearest Ink, you absolutely nailed this one and it's so well deserved.. soooo happy to see da trophy on urs! Sending you mermaid beams, huggssszzzz and magical moonlight always..
Empress Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 1:09 PM
Thank you my soulful star! Appreciate your support and kindness always ~ it came as a lovely surprise. Sending you light always
Bordner Avatar
July 23, 2026 at 8:54 AM
To be a living poetry, inking a worshiping worthy of genius beauty, a masterpiece made through a million hues of heart, the centerpiece of a poem's paradise...J.A.B.
Empress Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 1:10 PM
Theres a cadence and rhythm in your comments too dear Justin, thank you so much for appreciating my poems. I am grateful for your warm presence, sending you light always ~
Jones Avatar
July 23, 2026 at 2:47 AM
Another top win congratulations Inky!
Empress Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 1:11 PM
Thank you dear Karen, poetic soul. Your support means alot always ~ one of my very raw poems. I am grateful for the win
Sultan Avatar
July 23, 2026 at 1:36 AM
Congratulations dear .beautiful poetry with amazing methphore
Empress Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 1:11 PM
Thank you kindly. Sending you light always
Croft Avatar
July 23, 2026 at 1:30 AM
congratulations on your win!!!
Empress Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 1:12 PM
Thank you sweet soul, always ~ sending you light
Sultan Avatar
July 23, 2026 at 1:28 AM
Congratulations beauty and amazing
Dietrich Avatar
July 23, 2026 at 12:23 AM
You killed two birds with one stone. This will be a wow win with Edward as well. I am sure. Congrats on your trophy win, Inky. The very last part you put in italics sums up your poem beautifully. You can do any kind of artwork with Ekphrasis poetry . Your forte.
Empress Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 1:12 PM
Haha awwn sweet soul aunt! You are the best!!!
Hind Avatar
July 19, 2026 at 10:23 PM
wow, this made my face warm, lol- seriously tho, beautiful leading verses
Empress Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 3:01 AM
Aswwn
DiMino Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 10:20 AM
Oh to be young, and romantically aflame! Nothing ventured nothing gained. Fail or not, at least brave enough the play the highest stakes' game -- if armor to protect the heart, then never a leading part. You are a brave warrior of the heart:)) Brooms are everywhere, so never weep away the opportunity to be passionately swept away:)) Passion of all the great poets ring through sing through your rocketing verses. Blessings.
Empress Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 3:01 AM
Your comment warmed my heart and made me smile! Thank you! For reassuring me! Awwn thanm you also for saying all that about me! I am grateful and touched! And yes brooms available, will be useful these days! Haha! Sending you light always!
Smith  Avatar
July 16, 2026 at 5:49 PM
Very reflective verse.
Empress Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 3:00 AM
Thank you for noticing dear Alison. Sending you light always
Goldsmith Avatar
July 16, 2026 at 12:47 PM
What a wonderful write you have here. A deep read. Great Ending... "Good Luck" Have a lovely day writing away...............
Empress Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 3:00 AM
Thank you sweet paula! Appreciate your kind support always ~ sending you light
Liguori Avatar
July 16, 2026 at 12:46 PM
“ yet still I refuse to let these petals wilt”… you better not let the petals wilt… you’ll need an $80 broom to pick up the petals with! Good thing is I know where to buy such a broom!! Anyhow, great poem. Awesome as always.
Liguori Avatar
July 16, 2026 at 1:18 PM
https://rarely.co/products/the-homestead-broom-handmade-55
Empress Avatar
July 16, 2026 at 12:58 PM
Hahaha. Thats funny. Where can I get it? Let me know? You are funny dear Robert. Thank you so much for your unwavering support. Sending you light always ~ stay blessed
Sharma  Avatar
July 16, 2026 at 10:56 AM
Wow! I don't have enough words to start praising this absolutely poignant, deeply evocative and heart-aching poem.. those sentiments that you've described from the depths of your soul.. I'm just hypnotised.. if only the unclothed heart could make every armor fall and truly let itself, but sigh, the damages are to grieving.. charismatic lies can never decipher the dare that we carry and this can never decipher what truly lays beneath when everything, including flesh reduces to dust and only a forlorn scent remains ... eternally aching ... "restless to bloom as one, rooted to the runes written across your ambidextrous armor" I really love these lines and also "O bronco wild, white force, the bona fide heat heaving in bedazzled breeze" O my dear Ink only you can weave such visceral verses that feel ethereal and echo with pain at the same time.. it's a sensation! Your own signature! A truly profound piece
Empress Avatar
July 16, 2026 at 11:44 AM
I know I can count on you to understand my poems always dear Hiya, awwn I love the unicorn and mermaid light! Thank you so much for not just reading but feeling every word woven here. Sending you light always ~
Sharma  Avatar
July 16, 2026 at 10:59 AM
Sending you light, unicorn magic, mermaid beamsssss!!! And loveee, huggsszzz
Lane Avatar
July 16, 2026 at 10:32 AM
Would that we could clothe our hearts in a suit of armor. How many wounds would we not have to feel when love is lost? If a body can turn to dust after being dead and buried, then too, can't a heart be broken until it has no life except to be blown about in the wind? Emotionally adept poetry, Ink.
Empress Avatar
July 16, 2026 at 11:43 AM
Awwn thank you so very much dear linnersz, your comment made me tear up. Btw I see everything a bit extra large on this site tonight. Its blinding ~ i think some new changes... hmm ?? thank you so much for being here and for being so very supportive. Sending you light always
Onpaper Avatar
July 16, 2026 at 7:09 AM
an insatiable appetite to relish the realism of your silhouette of sapience,.. mmmm I love an appetite to be insatiable.. specially if it must relish the realism of my silhouette!!! Do I atleast look skinny in that silhouette?.. cox it’s not working for my eyes ae !! Walk me out of the devious doors of demented dreams;we walked in there together… we must get out together for sure!! free-flow me to a realm of quenching quiescence,.. mmmm u had me at quenching!!! where condemnatory pupils do not imprison the tongue that savors the flavor of foreverness,with everlasting vapors.. then let us do them a favor n make them witness the labor of ink on paper… ;P … ( I have no idea wat I was trying to do there …but.. it felt rite XDXD)…
Empress Avatar
July 16, 2026 at 11:42 AM
Hahaha I might really be a tigress papi! ;) you are too funny!
Onpaper Avatar
July 16, 2026 at 7:09 AM
across your ambidextrous armor... the amplified power emitting from that line … I let my thoughts wander to the waking wilderness,.. aah mee too .. I sit n wonder……. I am yours to worship, your masterpiece of paradise .. ayeee papi u little teasing tiger youuuu!!! Love this piece !!!
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