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To Break Free Again

How must I break free and fly away when your cold hands clamp me down? Your critical, callous words besmirch and pinion me to the ground. For I am a sensitive butterfly flailing in fear, struggling within the throes of your darkness. You shatter my repose my delicate wings close and my bright colors bleed and fade away. Once I was lissome and free now I stiffen in sad sorrow. In my dreams, I sojourn and soar I soar to a safe, celestial place caught up into a firmament of grace saved by a kind Hand of mercy where I can fly free again, forever. Written on 5/21/2018

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Date: 6/28/2018 10:39:00 PM
What an uplifting ending, Laura...How liberating. I loved the tranquility that conquers in the end...due to the HAND of grace. Bless you
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Date: 6/16/2018 3:15:00 PM
These words are very deep and so beautifully expressive... We can all relate to the feeling of wanting to break free in one way or another... Well penned, Laura!
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Date: 6/9/2018 10:22:00 PM
Well done, Laura. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 6/4/2018 11:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful verse. Well done!
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Date: 6/4/2018 7:38:00 PM
Great use of the 8 words and, Laura, with great imagery ; congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/4/2018 11:39:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Laura :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/4/2018 1:24:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi! :)
Date: 6/4/2018 11:04:00 AM
Wonderful writing Laura, I enjoyed this immensely, congrats on a fine shared win!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/4/2018 1:24:00 PM
Thank you so much for my placement in your great contest, John! I'm so glad you liked my poem :)
Date: 5/21/2018 6:18:00 PM
"Such a wonderful free verse, Laura. I absolutely got lost in your creativity.. " Very enjoyable reading!! Good luck with the contest!! All the best to you..
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/21/2018 6:25:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comments, Robertina! I’m so glad you liked this. :)

Book: Shattered Sighs