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To Break Away

To break away Written By Dean Masciarelli January 29, 2010 (1:19pm) I used to feel like I was slowly drifting out to sea Into the lonely abyss of misery And then recently Something happened to me That literally kept me from drifting away Deeper into the dark blue sea Because I realized That I am in control of my own destiny So I finally made the decision today To break away From all the chains of doubt and worry That were holding me in captivity So that I could finally be free From all the things that were hurting me

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Date: 1/29/2010 12:32:00 PM
Im glad about this decision, to be free from all the pain, thats my wish for this bruised heart..i love your poems Dean, they carry so much emotion..Charma
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Date: 1/29/2010 11:57:00 AM
So you read a positive thinking book? LOL Write some more real emotion when you crash, make me feel it, hurt me with your honesty. Go deeper
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