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To Bottle the 'Perfect Day'

Spring is gone, Summer’s fading in Fall's vanishing leaves, we are wading Winter seems a long way off, but storms soon will rage, exacerbating … Oh, let’s just ‘bottle the perfect day’ seal us in, forever to stay Yet perfection withers, growing stale absent change ~ its bottle a jail

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Date: 9/18/2024 8:40:00 AM
a delightful poem ~
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Date: 9/10/2024 10:23:00 AM
A fun write. If only we could bottle a perfect day. Now there is a thought. Guess it would go stale in time.  Have a fun day writing away...............
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Date: 9/10/2024 8:43:00 AM
You could be on to something there Gershon. Tom
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Date: 9/10/2024 6:07:00 AM
yeah, Gershon, but ya get the bottle with the ship in it you can sail away....
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