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To Belong

"The streams are my veins" ~ by Constance La France

I feel
I belong to
the pellucid stream that
gently swerves through the rocks as I
stroll leisurely along the rough ravine;
Warm and vibrant, it heals my soul;
My reflection, I see;
The connection
I feel

Date: 08/17/2022
Submitted for: Let Your Muse Be Inspired - R Form Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/7/2022 10:53:00 AM

Back with congratulations. Way to go. Sara

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 9/9/2022 9:28:00 PM

Thank you so very much dear Sara....Hugs....~ Ani

Constance La France

Date: 9/6/2022 11:04:00 PM

Ani, excellent Rictameter poem beautifully penned and presented and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - Let Your Muse Be Inspired, God Bless ~

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 9/9/2022 9:28:00 PM

Thank you so very much dear Constance, for, as always, inspiring us with your interesting contests....I enjoyed writing for this...Have a lovely day my friend...Hugs...~ Ani

Miranda Hawley

Date: 9/3/2022 5:27:00 AM

Congrats on your top win. "Warm and vibrant, it heals my soul; My reflection, I see;" best two lines of your poem!

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 9/9/2022 9:26:00 PM

Thank you so much Miranda...All participants are winners my dear....Its just because my name starts in 'A'. Am glad you liked those two lines in my poem. I will be soon coming to read your wonderful entry...Hugs...~ Ani

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 9/3/2022 1:18:00 AM

A beautiful Rictameter poem Anitha, congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest, well done… Belle

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/2/2022 6:45:00 AM

Congratulations on this great winner. Way to go. Sara

Bill Baker

Date: 8/31/2022 4:57:00 PM

Great entry for the contest, Ani. You have a good connection with both nature and your muse. :-) Hugs, Bill

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/26/2022 7:21:00 AM

Reads like a good contender to me for Constance's contest. Way to go. So much goes on around us, underneath us, and above us of which we are not even aware but this world, universe, space are in constant motion and change without us even knowing. Thanks for sharing and for visiting my blog. Sara

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/23/2022 6:06:00 AM

Well-put together Ani. The words flow perfectly and are soothing to read! Linda

JCB Brul

Date: 8/23/2022 6:05:00 AM

So soothing! You take me there...I also feel the connection as I read this splendid gem. A fav for me. A sure winnner...^___^JCB

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/21/2022 8:32:00 AM

you did the rictameter great justice here. You are an example of very fine English writing coming from India!! Love the theme too!!

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/20/2022 2:28:00 PM

Beautiful and healing. So nice :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/17/2022 1:38:00 PM

Very nice, Anitha. Indeed a healing reflection!

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 8/17/2022 7:28:00 AM

A soothing, calming read, Anitha, beautifully penned indeed. Good luck in the contest

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 8/17/2022 7:43:00 AM

Thank you so much Seeker for the visit and inspired comment... I thought I will miss this contest this time, somehow managed... Have a blessed day... ~ Ani