Anitha Jayasankar Poet Rictameter

To Belong

"The streams are my veins" ~ by Constance La France

I feel
I belong to
the pellucid stream that
gently swerves through the rocks as I
stroll leisurely along the rough ravine;
Warm and vibrant, it heals my soul;
My reflection, I see;
The connection
I feel

Date: 08/17/2022
Submitted for: Let Your Muse Be Inspired - R Form Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France

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Sara Kendrick September 7, 2022 at 10:53 AM Back with congratulations. Way to go. Sara Anitha Jayasankar September 9, 2022 at 9:28 PM Thank you so very much dear Sara....Hugs....~ Ani

Constance La France September 6, 2022 at 11:04 PM Ani, excellent Rictameter poem beautifully penned and presented and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - Let Your Muse Be Inspired, God Bless ~ Anitha Jayasankar September 9, 2022 at 9:28 PM Thank you so very much dear Constance, for, as always, inspiring us with your interesting contests....I enjoyed writing for this...Have a lovely day my friend...Hugs...~ Ani

Miranda Hawley September 3, 2022 at 5:27 AM Congrats on your top win. "Warm and vibrant, it heals my soul; My reflection, I see;" best two lines of your poem! Anitha Jayasankar September 9, 2022 at 9:26 PM Thank you so much Miranda...All participants are winners my dear....Its just because my name starts in 'A'. Am glad you liked those two lines in my poem. I will be soon coming to read your wonderful entry...Hugs...~ Ani

Beryl Edmonds September 3, 2022 at 1:18 AM A beautiful Rictameter poem Anitha, congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest, well done… Belle

Sara Kendrick September 2, 2022 at 6:45 AM Congratulations on this great winner. Way to go. Sara

Bill Baker August 31, 2022 at 4:57 PM Great entry for the contest, Ani. You have a good connection with both nature and your muse. :-) Hugs, Bill

Sara Kendrick August 26, 2022 at 7:21 AM Reads like a good contender to me for Constance's contest. Way to go. So much goes on around us, underneath us, and above us of which we are not even aware but this world, universe, space are in constant motion and change without us even knowing. Thanks for sharing and for visiting my blog. Sara

Linda Alice Fowler August 23, 2022 at 6:06 AM Well-put together Ani. The words flow perfectly and are soothing to read! Linda

JC Brul August 23, 2022 at 6:05 AM So soothing! You take me there...I also feel the connection as I read this splendid gem. A fav for me. A sure winnner...^___^JCB

Andrea Dietrich August 21, 2022 at 8:32 AM you did the rictameter great justice here. You are an example of very fine English writing coming from India!! Love the theme too!!

Heidi Sands August 20, 2022 at 2:28 PM Beautiful and healing. So nice :)

Kim Rodrigues August 17, 2022 at 1:38 PM Very nice, Anitha. Indeed a healing reflection!

Unseeking Seeker August 17, 2022 at 7:28 AM A soothing, calming read, Anitha, beautifully penned indeed. Good luck in the contest Anitha Jayasankar August 17, 2022 at 7:43 AM Thank you so much Seeker for the visit and inspired comment... I thought I will miss this contest this time, somehow managed... Have a blessed day... ~ Ani

Vijay Pandit August 17, 2022 at 4:41 AM Beautiful write Ani. Serene verse of longing traversing with the stream. No wonder you feel the connection! Much enjoyed your poem. Anitha Jayasankar August 17, 2022 at 6:53 AM Thank you so much Vijayji for the visit and the inspiring comment...Much appreciate... Have a blessed day... ~ Ani