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To Be Immortal

"Love is the emblem of eternity; it confounds all notion of time; effaces all memory of a beginning, all fear of an end." Majalbe At our wedding we said "I do" in voices softly spoken I miss you and will not give my heart to another man Our vows will be everlasting; remaining unbroken To love again is not part of the journey in my life span. My sorrow falls in tides of tears into a bottomless abyss Sand flows in an hourglass, but time stands still for me I wonder if you know how much I yearn for your kiss Endless is our love. You are the waves. I am the sea. You are the eternal light shining in my wistful eyes In the realm of boundless possibilities, you live in death As immortals we would dwell where no one ever dies... Life would be infinite, neither of us taking a last breath. Together, we could wander far beyond the moonlight and never again fear mortality could tear us apart. My mind is cluttered with limitless dreams tonight. I wish I could wake you with the beat of my own heart. June 5, 2021 Writing Prompt - Endless - Contest Sponsored by Constance La France

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Date: 6/19/2021 12:18:00 PM
Jenna, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Endless - Challenge with this beautifully penned and emotional poem, and I like the image and quote also, love _Constance
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Date: 6/14/2021 6:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win, Dear Poet - so well-deserved. A brilliant poem - the required words are used effortlessly and beautifully. Love and best wishes ~ Mala
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Date: 6/13/2021 10:31:00 AM
Wonderful. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/6/2021 7:15:00 AM
Wonderful writing, sweet lady. I love it and hope it's a winner. God bless you always. Love, Gina
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/6/2021 7:18:00 AM
Thank you for commenting, Gina. I was beginning to think I'd written something offensive. I appreciate your good wishes.
Date: 6/5/2021 10:44:00 AM
A contest poem so well done. Words used perfectly and seamlessly. Your poetry is great. Best for a win. Hugs.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/6/2021 2:48:00 AM
Thank you for your positive thoughts, Victor.

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