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To All My Children --

Remember your Dad when times get tough ~ I pulled through and you've got my stuff December 26, 2018 Entry in "Last Line" Poetry Contest Sponsor: Silent One

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Date: 12/30/2018 1:13:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win :) - Best wishes for the new year, Gershon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/30/2018 6:07:00 PM
Appreciated, Anne-Lise! ~ Gershon
Date: 12/29/2018 3:46:00 PM
Congratulations, Gershon, so happy to see this on the winner's list!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/29/2018 7:49:00 PM
Thanks, Michelle. And thanks for appreciating it for what it is/was. (I'm referencing your previous comment). Happy 2019!
Date: 12/29/2018 8:05:00 AM
Hi Gershon, I found this one-liner to be good and funny at the same time. Congratulations on your 2nd place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/29/2018 7:49:00 PM
Thank you Alexis! Maybe we can make it into a candy mantra: Good-and-Funny, Good-and-Funny, Good-and-Funny... (Remember Good-and-Plenty?! Do they even make that stuff anymore? --Probably not). ~ Gershon
Date: 12/29/2018 6:38:00 AM
Nice advice.. Have a great start to the new year.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/29/2018 7:47:00 PM
Thanks, Silent. And thanks for sponsoring another great monoku contest! Happy 2019 to you and yours. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 12/27/2018 5:14:00 PM
Wonderful words, hope your children heed them!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/27/2018 9:38:00 PM
Me too. You can take that to the bank. :) gw
Date: 12/27/2018 1:47:00 PM
love the amusing sentiments you shared, gershon...a gem of a work...huggs
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Date: 12/27/2018 3:16:00 PM
When I wrote it I wasn't sure if it was the real thing or cubic zirconium. Thanks for your vote of confidence, nette! Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 12/27/2018 9:14:00 AM
Love it, Gershon! Disturbing that so many will relate.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/27/2018 3:15:00 PM
Yup.
Date: 12/27/2018 8:19:00 AM
This was funny. When is the yard sale? :) Best wishes in the contest my friend.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/27/2018 3:15:00 PM
I'm scrounging around for a yard big enough to hold everything... So first, I have to find a yard for sale... :)
Date: 12/27/2018 4:59:00 AM
Powerful Gershon! Well done :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/27/2018 3:14:00 PM
Much appreciated, Heidi! :)
Date: 12/27/2018 2:42:00 AM
I love your monoku...and sense of humour, Gershon! Regards // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/29/2018 4:07:00 PM
Go ahead :) :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/27/2018 3:14:00 PM
Can I quote you on this, Paul? Most people think I'm about as funny as a lifelong undertaker. Thanks! :)
Date: 12/27/2018 12:12:00 AM
Very sweet, and I am sure your children will appreciate it. Ha! We always joke about how big the bon fire will be here after we are gone.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/27/2018 3:13:00 PM
I guess mine will be bigger than some...
Date: 12/26/2018 10:54:00 PM
:) A last warning to your children? Very funny monoku, Gershon. Best wishes in the contest.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/27/2018 3:12:00 PM
Thanks for your feedback, Carolyn. Appreciated! ~ Gershon

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