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You flit around the marshes and in places warm and wet. as a beetle you’re about as bright as any bug can get! You have a tiny flashlight built into your small tummy, but for foes, your bio-luminescence is not yummy! Though when a creature tastes you, they’re sure to spit you out, There’s something even better that your light is all about! You’re looking for a sweetie when you flash your little glow, and when you synchronize in groups, it’s like a disco show! How I loved to chase you when I was just a kid, and I’d catch you in a jar with holes poked in its lid. That wasn’t nice of me. It must have caused you fright. You were only lending magic to my summer night. How I miss you, lightning bug, known as firefly. And how I wish that I could see you in this western sky. Even in the Midwest state that I left behind I hear you are becoming more difficult to find. Too many fields paved over; no places you can hide. Too many lights from people and too much pesticide. People use their headlights; this is confusing you. Your blinking light gets all mixed up. You don’t know what to do. Fewer are the places where, dear firefly, you can stay. How sorry we will all be when your magic fades away! Written July 16, 2016 for the contest of David Lindsay

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Date: 7/28/2016 12:03:00 PM
Love it, Andrea. I have a special place for those friendly, ancient, starry beetles, along with the dwindling bees, horseshoe crabs and endangered others. :-)
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Date: 7/28/2016 6:03:00 AM
Nice poem :)
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Date: 7/25/2016 8:00:00 AM
One of my favorites, congrats Andrea.
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Date: 7/24/2016 6:44:00 PM
Nice tribute to fireflies, Andrea. We have so many here where I live. I still love watching! Nice poem, and congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/23/2016 1:41:00 PM
A lovely poem you use the form well It'ss touching tribute show how man contribute To there changing fortune. Nicely done
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Date: 7/23/2016 9:14:00 AM
Absolutely loved this one,congrats on your win Andrea!
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Date: 7/23/2016 8:16:00 AM
This is a great poem, Andrea. It's very descriptive and skillfully-written, and the choice of theme is thoughtful and clearly conveyed--a 7. Janice
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Date: 7/23/2016 8:17:00 AM
Oh, congratulations on your well-deserved win--meant to say above! Janice
Date: 7/22/2016 11:17:00 PM
Congrat on your win Andrea, you so beautifully brought this issue of firefly up. Thanks for making us conscious. I've seen fireflies here in my island, very rare though.
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Date: 7/20/2016 10:01:00 AM
An superb poem and a very delightful to read my dear friend, Andrea! Love it and enjoyed. A winner for me. Thanks a lot for sharing! Have a wonderful week my dear friend. love and hug, Leonora
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Date: 7/19/2016 3:50:00 PM
Loved this! I just saw fireflies for the first time in June! I fell in love with them :)
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Date: 7/19/2016 7:42:00 AM
This is a special piece with a significant message!
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Date: 7/19/2016 7:01:00 AM
I like it! Love the way it rhymes! .... we still have them here in Western New York. ... Fran
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Date: 7/19/2016 6:31:00 AM
Oh Andrea...thiis poem is so delightful. I feel sure it will garner a top placement! I loved it! Please share it at PFT if you haven't already. 7 ; )
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Date: 7/19/2016 5:02:00 AM
Fireflies create magic as do your words in this write:)
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Date: 7/18/2016 7:01:00 PM
Used to catch them and put them in bottles for a lamp. O the summer nights of youth! Nice poem! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 7/18/2016 5:02:00 PM
what a beauty, andie..i have always been mesmerized by fireflies!... mail soon and huggs
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Date: 7/18/2016 1:20:00 PM
Andrea I have seen last firefly thirty years ago in a countryside. Are they extinct?
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Date: 7/18/2016 12:39:00 PM
Hi Andrea, You painted a lovely picture with words. I could envision right there chasing a firefly. Excellent job. You should shine bright in the contest. I got a feeling I will see you in the winners circle. Good luck in the contest.A Big seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/18/2016 11:47:00 AM
When we lived in the country I used to gake firefly walks every night. Wonderful picture. Love, dver
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Date: 7/18/2016 10:39:00 AM
We still have lightening bugs at our house. I love to watch them glow... Nice piece.
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Date: 7/18/2016 10:18:00 AM
Yes I remember catching these when I was young. Put them in a jar and see if they would light up and then release. Wonderful poem bringing back memories. love phyl
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Date: 7/18/2016 6:15:00 AM
As is often the case when time goes by, it is the little things we miss. Lovely write, Andrea, I'm sure it will do well. Glow, girl! Viv x
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Date: 7/17/2016 11:42:00 PM
Sweetly nostalgic lines with the glow of a giant firefly... I see you know quite a lot about them. Never knew anything about them beyond the glow. Glad to learn!
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Date: 7/17/2016 8:52:00 PM
I love the firefly Andrea. I saw them out in abundance last night. Lovely poem
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