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It's so rich.
It's so innocent.
It's so pure.
It's so pure in the sense that no one else has touched it.
Not one else has read it, not even me.
It's still in my mind.
A simple thought.
An idea.
A memory.
Before it hits paper, it's as real as it will ever be.
Leave it there.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Agustin Avatar
June 27, 2026 at 12:08 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 8:49 PM
lauren baldwin, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA...
A  Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 3:52 PM
LAUREN, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~
Breidenthal Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 8:03 PM
Great poem. Very insightful and simple. :)
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