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I can draw you in Or I can lead you astray. I am a title.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/27/2009 10:32:00 AM
Wonderful senryu! I like the intrigue that comes with it. Thanks for reading my haiku and senryu. Peace.
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Date: 1/15/2009 5:41:00 PM
Keep the good work up Raul I really like it. Keep writing more poems and good work...................................Danielle
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Date: 12/21/2008 8:09:00 PM
Please draw me in....I'm already a stray...I love it...keep up the special writing you always do...L in Lou. KY
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Date: 12/14/2008 11:53:00 AM
Wow, nice haiku. Thanks for you supportive comments.
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Date: 12/13/2008 6:23:00 PM
This was so clever and unique....it really did draw me in!! Loved it! Well done, Raul ! Love, Carrie
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Date: 12/6/2008 3:46:00 PM
Thanks for your comments on my poems. DN
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Date: 12/6/2008 12:11:00 AM
One of the best poems I've read this week. No critique of mine needs to exemplify the truism(s) presented here. Honestly and outspokenly averred! Peace always, John
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Date: 12/5/2008 11:53:00 AM
The more I read this poem the more it brings truth. Love Elizabeth
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Date: 12/4/2008 4:46:00 PM
Clever poem you have here Raul, It's so true how a title can draw us in or repel us
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Date: 12/4/2008 4:35:00 PM
this is a brilliant portrayal and very true to it's title
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Date: 12/4/2008 4:30:00 PM
Nice use of personification for a delightful poem. A lot of truth to your words. Enjoyed this one. Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 12/4/2008 3:08:00 PM
You hammered this poem with good insight. It is so true of a title. Love the way you captured it. Love Elizabeth
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Date: 12/4/2008 1:32:00 PM
Awesome write. So clever and so true. Simply brilliant, Raul. Love Robin
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Date: 12/4/2008 5:30:00 AM
They can be an attention getter for sure, and often add so much to your write. Excellent! Love, Shar
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Date: 12/4/2008 3:31:00 AM
So true! I am so drawn to titles that really pop. But sometimes, the most understated title, is what suits the poem best. love, Kristin
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Date: 12/3/2008 11:14:00 PM
Yes~Titles are very important indeed!"Hello Raul Moreno-It is good to make your acquaintance! And thank you for stopping by darkness falls-it showed a lot about your character! Also, from what I have gathered along the way form Michael Torres, you seem to be possibly be a Christian? If so, then blessed you truly are-beyond words actually!! So, I hope we shall meet again, and perhaps, you shall enlighten and bless me, with some joy of "Truth!"~"Warnth & Blessings To All You Love, John!"
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Date: 12/3/2008 9:11:00 PM
funny how some titles can be inviting and the poem reads well, like this one. And some titles reflect just the opposite. ............very thoughtful. later gater!
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