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Wonderful senryu! I like the intrigue that comes with it. Thanks for reading my haiku and senryu. Peace.

Keep the good work up Raul I really like it. Keep writing more poems and good work...................................Danielle

Please draw me in....I'm already a stray...I love it...keep up the special writing you always do...L in Lou. KY

Wow, nice haiku. Thanks for you supportive comments.

This was so clever and unique....it really did draw me in!! Loved it! Well done, Raul ! Love, Carrie

Thanks for your comments on my poems. DN

One of the best poems I've read this week. No critique of mine needs to exemplify the truism(s) presented here. Honestly and outspokenly averred! Peace always, John

The more I read this poem the more it brings truth. Love Elizabeth

Clever poem you have here Raul, It's so true how a title can draw us in or repel us

this is a brilliant portrayal and very true to it's title

Nice use of personification for a delightful poem. A lot of truth to your words. Enjoyed this one. Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. Keep on writing. Karen

You hammered this poem with good insight. It is so true of a title. Love the way you captured it. Love Elizabeth

Awesome write. So clever and so true. Simply brilliant, Raul. Love Robin

They can be an attention getter for sure, and often add so much to your write. Excellent! Love, Shar

So true! I am so drawn to titles that really pop. But sometimes, the most understated title, is what suits the poem best. love, Kristin

Yes~Titles are very important indeed!"Hello Raul Moreno-It is good to make your acquaintance! And thank you for stopping by darkness falls-it showed a lot about your character! Also, from what I have gathered along the way form Michael Torres, you seem to be possibly be a Christian? If so, then blessed you truly are-beyond words actually!! So, I hope we shall meet again, and perhaps, you shall enlighten and bless me, with some joy of "Truth!"~"Warnth & Blessings To All You Love, John!"

funny how some titles can be inviting and the poem reads well, like this one. And some titles reflect just the opposite. ............very thoughtful. later gater!