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Oct. 19, 2023 7.03am

As semestral break begins, heaps of household chores and dirt make me spin.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/24/2023 2:07:00 PM

Yes, bring home all the dirty, stained and stinky. LOL..Thanks for sharing this humorous one with us and for dropping by my page. My grandson did that one on me then he went to work as a long-haul trucker and would come home about every two weeks for two days for me to do the laundry. I enjoyed reading this one. Sara K

Len Gasun

Date: 10/23/2023 7:33:00 AM

How do you feel today 2 - One liner Contest Judged: 10/19/2023 12:00:00 AM Sponsored by: Silent One Place 2 ( up to 3rdmulti-w)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/21/2023 2:11:00 PM

- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Leonora - Have a lovely weekend ... with a lot of rest :) - hugs

Len Gasun
Date: 10/23/2023 7:31:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your warm congratulatory greetings and weekend wishes my dear poet friend Anne-Lise. God bless you always and your writngs. Hugs

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/20/2023 7:11:00 PM

Dear Len, your golden pen has captured the feeling of your chosen word "tired" with poetic flair! Splendid imagery.. Fall cleaning makes my head spin too :) Congratulations for your excellent win in Silent One's contest. Warmest wishes, and don't work too hard, my poet friend.. ~Susan

Len Gasun
Date: 10/23/2023 7:30:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my monoku, your uplifting words, piece of advice and your warm congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Susan. God bless you alwys and your writings. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/19/2023 12:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I really enjoyed reading your creative "Tired" write. Chores are No fun. We should go out to play... Have a blessed/great day writing away....................

Len Gasun
Date: 10/23/2023 7:29:00 AM

Yes, chores are no fun sometimes especially if still tired from work my dear poet friend Paula. I'm glad you've enjoyed it my dear poet friend. Thanks a lot for reading, uplifting words and your warm congratulatory greetings. Blessings to you always and your writngs. Hugs

Silent One

Date: 10/19/2023 11:47:00 AM

Nice one.. Congratulations on your placement.

Len Gasun
Date: 10/23/2023 7:26:00 AM

Thank you so much for acknowledging my poem in your contest my dear poet friend Silent. Your approval through my win means a lot to me. Blessings to you always and your writings. Hugs

Eve Roper

Date: 10/18/2023 6:52:00 PM

Len, a time for learn so always important and cleaning a never-ending job. God bless you

Len Gasun
Date: 10/23/2023 7:25:00 AM

You are right my dear poet friend Eve. Thank you so much for reading my monoku and for the uplifting words. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

I Am Anaya

Date: 10/18/2023 5:50:00 PM

Len, there are many ways to enjoy chores... Dance it out many rely on a playlist of fun tunes to keep their energy up during unpleasant chores. The most popular genres seem to be top 40 hits from the 80s, 90s, and 00s, but anything with a fast beat and a joyful cadence will do the trick. I just read that, poor Len. Great Monoku! Wishing you rest. xo Anaya

Len Gasun
Date: 10/18/2023 6:35:00 PM

You are right my dear poet friend Anaya. Actually, I accompanied them with singing in few days. Now,I'm almost done. I'm now in my gardening and I'll finalize them all with dancing. I'll play those music on my phone. Thank you so much for reading my poem, your loving pieces of advice and uplifting words. God bless you always. Many hugs.