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Tire Attire Preposition Poem

Ode to my crocs -- BALD from high wear, In serious need of good-riddance During my TREAD on a wet floor with care In the throws of a SKID and imBALANCE By the absence of any TRACTION Between the floor and the sole of my croc In need of replacement action for my crocs on the croc-chopping block Up from the floor no worse for the wear Through all the sales in the fliers At the store with the Croc footwear Back home with the new set of TIRES

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Mike Hauser

Date: 11/4/2018 6:49:00 PM

Love this! I've written 2 or 3 Croc poems myself... It's all I wear!

Hannah Borke
Date: 11/4/2018 11:53:00 PM

That's right. We had exchanged croc poems. I deleted my long poem because I couldn't improve it. In any case, I read poems much more than I write them, so you don't need to bother to return comments. I read all your poems because they're more witty than silly.

Silent One

Date: 10/18/2017 2:04:00 PM

WEll written poem, I do like your use of language...

Hannah Borke
Date: 10/18/2017 3:11:00 PM

Its simplicity belies how hard I strained for this result.

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 8/15/2017 11:25:00 AM

Well a really nice written poem, I really enjoyed reading it and the rhyme in your poem was really nice,

Hannah Borke
Date: 8/15/2017 11:34:00 AM

Thanks

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/7/2017 5:41:00 PM

super super clever, Hannah. And I wanted to see your first post and thank you for your lovely comment on my poem.

Hannah Borke
Date: 8/7/2017 5:54:00 PM

Thanks, talented poet, for reading my poem.

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 7/20/2017 7:18:00 PM

Don't know much about the preposition proposition, but the tire attire strikes me as delightfully silly and wonderful. About Crocs — I'm mad at 'em! The first pair of flips I bought were the best thing I ever wore on my feet (except toenails). When they wore out I went to buy another pair and, of course, they'd redesigned them. I'd give my new ones to anyone who'd want 'em. Back to your poem — I like it! Now 'scuse please, I gotta go walk the dog while wearing New Balance flip flops! :-(

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 7/20/2017 7:48:00 PM

Well then, I prepose that ya done good!

Hannah Borke
Date: 7/20/2017 7:37:00 PM

Explaining the preposition aspect.... I took a grammar course that included an activity to write a poem, starting the lines with prepositions. It was a strain to manipulate the words, but this was the result.

Edward Mccall

Date: 7/17/2017 9:55:00 AM

this is such a cool rhyme Hannah I like it.

Hannah Borke
Date: 7/17/2017 10:28:00 AM

It was inspired by my gratefulness to G-d for crocs.

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/15/2017 4:19:00 PM

Always late to the party but thought I'd do a drive by and see what all the commotion was about. This is very clever and also extremely witty, Hannah. Nicely penned!

Hannah Borke
Date: 6/15/2017 5:04:00 PM

Thanks for your attention to ALL my poems! I'm proud of my poems, but if my page stagnates, it will be for dearth of ideas. (No need to waste a follow on me)

Old Man Emu

Date: 4/27/2017 5:32:00 PM

Hi Hannah, enjoyed your poem. Love the title too very apt. Look forward to reading some more. Regards, Craig

Chris Green

Date: 4/27/2017 3:25:00 PM

That was very cool Hannah. I have a pair of Crocs but I just never could get use to wearing them but....I also have a pair of croc flip flops that are my favorites and I haven't found any others the fit and feel as good as these. Nice and yes, this was quite different in form and theme. Nicely done.

Hannah Borke
Date: 4/27/2017 3:48:00 PM

Thanks! My first compliment ever! I won't be getting many more due to zero creativity. At best, I could rhyme a true incident which that was. This was produced as a result a free online grammar course that challenged us to write a preposition poem -- the reason it's so different. As to Crocs, if it's the bumps by the heel that's bothersome, I take a 'pointed' pliers to the new ones and pull me out one at a time.

Chris Green
Date: 4/27/2017 3:42:00 PM

That's funny. I might just give that a try. And don't sell yourself short about your poetry. Just keep trying if that is what you want to do. We all started somewhere. You will do just fine.

Hannah Borke
Date: 4/27/2017 3:38:00 PM

Hannah Borke

Date: 4/27/2017 2:26:00 PM

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