Tiny Tim Becomes Musclebound Jim

      We all knew a fellow named ‘Tiny Tim’
      Fit as a fiddle, though extremely slim

         Poor Tim had weakling muscles
         And needed a side hustle

      So he spent all his spare time in the gym
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James Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 1:29 PM
Jolly Jim Giant and sweetcorn came to mind for some reason lol. Emilia : )
Jones Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 12:28 AM
lol from Tiny Tim to Giant Jim! Fun!
Crandall Avatar
June 24, 2025 at 9:08 AM
Haha, now, I don't mess around with Jim.
Mckeithan Avatar
June 24, 2025 at 12:14 AM
Nice rhyme Gershon. Did he remember to play Tiptoe through the Tulips when he got muscle bound?
Wolf Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 4:30 PM
I hope so, Oliver.
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