TINY RAINDROPS

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TINY RAINDROPS tiny raindrop's dance on a leaf's quivering edge moment suspended

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Bernard F. Asuncion

Date: 6/13/2025 5:43:00 PM

You've captured such a delicate and fleeting moment with those lines! It evokes a beautiful sense of stillness and observation.

Yellow Rose
Date: 6/14/2025 3:11:00 PM

thank you for your kind and complimentary words. They mean a lot to me given the type of poet I perceive you to be. have a pleasant evening, yellow rose

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/13/2025 4:53:00 PM

charming ~ for your consideration, suggest removing the apostrophe in line 1.

Yellow Rose
Date: 6/14/2025 3:12:00 PM

thanks for your kind words and for the suggestion. Wishing you a lovely evening, yellow rose

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/12/2025 1:06:00 PM

Hello yellow Rose, this beautifully done. /Hugs. / /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/14/2025 3:24:00 PM

Hello Yellow rose, Okay i have colored you grafteful. /Darlene/ Hugs.

Yellow Rose
Date: 6/14/2025 3:12:00 PM

many thanks, Darlene, for your visit and for your complimentary words. Color me grateful, yellow rose