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Tiny Particles of Ice

A nasty cold drizzle settles in soon after dark Turning our street into a dazzling streak, Sparkling like diamonds under a neon spark Now the temperature is dropping, as I speak. Turning our street into a dazzling streak Of mica reflections, soon tiny particles of ice, Now the temperature is dropping, as I speak Only those who love winter will think it nice. Of mica reflections, soon tiny particles of ice Will turn the pavement into sheets of glass Only those who love winter will think it nice, I utter a prayer that this, too, will quickly pass. Will turn the pavement into sheets of glass Sometime during the early morning hours, I utter a prayer that this, too, will quickly pass As my normal happy-go-lucky disposition sours. Sometime during the early morning hours Sparkling like diamonds under a neon spark As my normal happy-go-lucky disposition sours A nasty cold drizzle settles in soon after dark.
Written October 26, 2022

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Date: 10/27/2022 5:03:00 PM
I love it that this is also a personification poem! Personifying ice. I wish I had thought of it! Trixie is smacking me in the head.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/27/2022 9:12:00 PM
Thank you, Caren. Tell Trixie I said to settle down!

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