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TINY DEMON DRUMMER

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You arrive uninvited, a persistent houseguest~ the itch, oh, the itch, a tiny demon drummer living under my skin. You’ve got a whole band, tiny epidermal elves with sandpaper hands, scratching out a symphony. Doc says stress, allergies are to blame, a propensity in your DNA. "Try this cream, it's a miracle!" Miracles cost thirty bucks a tube and smell faintly of old socks and hope. I've tried everything~ Oatmeal baths that make me feel like a breakfast cereal gone wrong and creams so thick they could grout tiles, that smell of desperation, a scent that screams, "Please, just stop itching!" All the lotions, the creams, the steroid sonnets I smear on, they only quiet you temporarily. You’ll be back, with your tiny, insistent drum song. I scratch. I know I shouldn't. The doctor glares, a silent disapproval. But oh, the sweet relief, that fleeting moment of bliss before the fire returns, brighter and angrier than before. Oh eczema, you win!! So, I’ll slather myself in a lotion vaguely medicinal, try not to scratch in public, maybe, just maybe, laugh a little at the absurdity of it all.
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Date: 9/18/2025 8:06:00 AM
It's funny and realistic since it's full of rage and dumbness with plenty of small victories, Dear Sara! That's a wonderful piece! With hilarious antics and vivid descriptions, your little drummer perfectly captures the itchy sensation of dermatitis. This is true!
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Date: 9/18/2025 8:05:00 AM
What a lovely sense of humour ~ particularly loved when I got to the lines "Miracles cost thirty bucks a tube / and smell faintly of old socks and hope." Great tribute with this personalization of your demon drummer. Beautifully executed !
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Date: 9/18/2025 7:20:00 AM
A witty and relatable piece, Sara—your tiny demon drummer perfectly captures the relentless itch of eczema with humor and vivid imagery. The mix of frustration, absurdity, and small victories makes it both funny and empathetic.
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