Tiny Ant Crawls

tiny ant crawls God kisses his face and keeps him on a green leaf tiny ant crawls tiny ant crawls: haiku © rajat kanti chakrabarty November 15, 2014

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/16/2014 7:43:00 AM

rajat love the picture you drew in this one dear friend excellent pen pal

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/16/2014 9:29:00 AM

O liam you are so nice. Love pal. Take care > have a great day XXXX rajat

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 11/15/2014 11:39:00 AM

good haiku Rajat yes I spent 10 years in East Africa loved the weather out there For me I am a traditionalist when it comes to haiku and like the 5/7/5 rhythm hugs

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/15/2014 12:44:00 PM

Yes I do prefer that I like traditional 5-7-5 for haiku. Sometimes I deviate from the tradition as I did here . Here middle line is much longer in comparison to 1 and 3. The middle line describes God's action and 1,3 describe that of a tiny ant. Love Shadow XXXXX rajat