Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Quatrain

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Tinkle Christmas Spirit, Tinkle

TINKLE CHRISTMAS SPIRIT, TINKLE

Bosom of palpitating air:
air blowing crisp and cold
cold amidst sweet greetings of care:
care that never grows old!

Old Christmas bells, Tinkle! Tinkle!
Tinkles sound cheers and joys;
joy invites peace. Hence, love twinkles.
Twinkling touch, we'll employ...

Employed presents under the tree,
tree dressed in balls and lights.
Lights agreeing to dance: carefree
freely dazzling all night!

Night persons away from their homes:
homes where their hearts belong,
to belong whereever they roam.
Roam but not a lifelong...

Let long uttered prayers and roars
be roars of unity.
Unity to clear clouds of war
wars ending cruelty!
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10:00 pm, December 10, 2015

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Poet Destroyer A January 5, 2016 at 12:13 AM Olive, Nice win... ~LINDA~

Skat A January 2, 2016 at 1:09 AM OLIVE, Congratulations on your "Chain Verse 1 WIN". SKAT

Edward Ebbs January 1, 2016 at 9:56 PM Olive, thank you for participating, good job and congrats on your third place!

James Fraser December 16, 2015 at 12:49 PM Lovely clever Quatrain little one oozing warmth and a desire to have a loving existance for everyone. Wouldn't that be wonderful, for the World so needs it presently ~~ hugs//James ~~xx

Andrea Dietrich December 15, 2015 at 3:50 PM you did a wonderful job with this form. I have one of these types of poems waiting in the wings!! it took me forever to do. You too?? Good luck in the contest. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 17, 2015 at 6:39 AM Andie, this poem is one of the poem that I was really thinking twice of finishing because am having a hard time.. =`) hehehe but i like it anyway.. though I wasn't satisfied how it sound as I read out loud anyhow, I know I extend the message much.. =`) hugs!

James Inman December 15, 2015 at 10:04 AM Nice Christmas wish, Olive. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 16, 2015 at 8:28 PM Thanks much James, I guess this what we always want right.. =`)~Olive Eloisa =`)

Ravi Sathasivam December 13, 2015 at 12:17 AM Excellent. Beautifully done. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 16, 2015 at 6:44 AM Thanks much Ravi but like what I mentioned its not one of my best..

Paul Callus December 12, 2015 at 6:36 AM If people all over the world were to follow in your footsteps, there would be peace and love instead of hate and war. May the spirit of Christmas change the hearts of those who need a fresh outlook on life. Hugs // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 16, 2015 at 6:42 AM I always pray to the same Spirit touch each and everyone of us PAul.. =`) Thanks much, hugs~Olive Eloisa =`)

Emile Pinet December 11, 2015 at 9:57 AM The imagery is well suited for the ambiance that the author has created throughout this piece, one of joyous celebration and Christmas cheer then trailing off to feelings of disappointment and despair..Emile. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 14, 2015 at 4:54 AM Emile, thank you so much for your generous remark and encouragement.. =`) In this write I want to present two sides of the world during Christmas, the happy atmosphere Christmas brings but still there is the unfinished war happening somewhere, which has been the prayers years ago.. peace. God bless you..