Get Your Premium Membership

Tinge of Purple Rests Within My Heart

Tinge Of Purple Rests Within My Heart Tinge of purple rests within my tired heart Soft touches of a heavy old soul Now pulling on my heavy empty cart Often my world seems to be lumps of coal. I heard thumps of acorns falling on down That majestic oak sheds its little seeds Old age has me feeling like a sad clown Longing to ride again, runaway steeds Tis winter! Culprit bringing its bleak cold Seeds resting secure in the frozen ground Spring will come and they rise out very bold Yet again life comes right on around Nature teaches us, all will be alright Life and death matches just like day and night Robert J. Lindley, 1-26-2016 Poem Syllable Counter Results Syllables Per Line: 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 Total # Syllables: 140 Total # Lines: 17 (Including empty lines) Words with (syllables) counted programmatically: Total # Words: 107 NOTES: 1. My muse woke me at 4 am to write this. I told her no but she nagged until I rose to do the deed. I' tell ya , I want to strangle her sometimes but then at other times love her to death.. 2. The immediate repetition of the word "heavy" in verses two and three is intentional and used for effect, as both the old soul and its life's burdens are now currently found to be very heavy to bear. Poet's prerogative , norms be damned says I.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/26/2016 4:46:00 PM
Hi Robert,When that Muse comes we never know but if we answer the call then we may come out with such poetry as you lay before us. An excellent flow and content to this Sonnet Robert. As i always say keep true to yourself and the words you write shall always have deeper meaning to those who read them. May your pen ever be dipped in gold and your heart ever sing in all you write. A seven for another excellent write....Vladislav.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/26/2016 11:56:00 AM
I don't think muse strangling is permitted, Robert. In this case you should be thanking her for putting pen to paper...no matter the time of day or night. ;) Praise to your muse.
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things