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Times We Knew

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I love to watch the sun when day is not quite done, and it starts to bleed red where the clouds have been bled. I smile as its last light slowly sinks out of sight. I love the twinkling stars the reddish blush of Mars chilly night winds that blow and a full moon's soft glow. Color in the night sky, is a sign; dusk is nigh. I love it when the rain is in sync with my pain and sheds tears just for me, so everyone can see. Drop by drop, tear by tear, it masks my hidden fear. I love the times we knew, and the things that we'd do. (Rhyme) 2/7/2018

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Normie Payton

Date: 2/14/2018 4:38:00 PM

I love all that stuff too, what's up Emile, lol. Great job.

Emile Pinet
Date: 2/14/2018 4:48:00 PM

Thanks Normie, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.

Eve Roper

Date: 2/11/2018 8:46:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning write, Emile, fantastic write.. Hugs Eve

Emile Pinet
Date: 2/12/2018 1:01:00 PM

Thanks Eve, your comments are always appreciated my friend, Emile.

Charlie Smith

Date: 2/11/2018 11:02:00 AM

Did they ever, congratulations Emile, well done...

Emile Pinet
Date: 2/12/2018 1:01:00 PM

Thanks Charlie, your comments are truly appreciated my friend, Emile.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/11/2018 2:36:00 AM

Oh I love this beautiful poem that captures the beauty of nature as day is done in a metaphor of a long life lived as old age approaches. Congratulations on your wonder first placement Emile. I feel the same way about the rain. I am putting this gem into my Faves! : )

Emile Pinet
Date: 2/11/2018 8:59:00 AM

Thanks so much Connie, you always get my poems my friend, Emile.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 2/10/2018 9:13:00 PM

BIG CONGRATS to win top on your wonderful poem. Hugs.

Emile Pinet
Date: 2/11/2018 8:57:00 AM

Thanks Anisha, your comments and support are appreciated my friend, Emile.

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/10/2018 9:48:00 AM

What a lovely tribute to a long love affair. Beautifully done, Emile. Congrats on your win.

Emile Pinet
Date: 2/10/2018 1:46:00 PM

Thanks Line, your words are a ray of sunshine in an otherwise dismal day my friend, Emile.

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/10/2018 9:10:00 AM

Hi Emile, This is such a good write about two people growing old together. Congratulations on your 1st place win . Congratulations on your 1st place win . It was well deserved :-) Alexis

Emile Pinet
Date: 2/10/2018 9:21:00 AM

Thanks so much Alexis, I welcome your comments my friend, Emile.