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Times of Trials and Tribulations

The changing times grant the saddest of goodbyes. Saying such gives you a power along with a mighty burden. The power is of choice, to choose your destiny in a way not yet defined. While the curse, in all of its splendor, acts as a lead weight in your heart. As well as a net for all the pain we can choose to feel. A pain so hot, it burns away all of the love left in your heart. Causing said recipient to try putting out the fire with sweet numbing liquid. It works, though the solution is only temporary, needing constant reapplication. Its during these times, we are tested. A test of the metal of our character, refining you to be one perfectly broken being. Now incapable of feeling the fire present in the our souls, the croak in the voice. Of times long since past, numbed away from the slow burn of the sweet liquid.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/10/2015 3:39:00 PM
SKAT I have to admit that your probably right, the first time I started posting there were a ton of options for what it is so TBH i clicked a couple that I had heard of previously. It does make me curious enough to research a little bit more about the types though. ~TheSinfulOne
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Date: 12/10/2015 1:27:00 PM
Hi Luke, thank you for reading my first poem. I don't think this is a sonnet, I've never written one, but read plenty. However, it is a deep and dramatic verse, in which has a great ending... Enjoyed. SKAT
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Date: 12/8/2015 10:42:00 PM
great luke
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