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Upon my tiptoes, I gaze through a window, the window of my mind. I pull back the curtain, peer from a partially drawn blind. Before me lay this youthful beauty, perfection in every line, And standing there beside her was the old keeper of all time. He swiftly knelt beside her, and stroked her heaving chest, Carefully caressed every curve, and sagged her gentle breast. He cast his spell upon her, aging her as if fine wine. Left some thoughtful wrinkles, added character in each and every line. Bestowed upon her all that wisdom, more than she had ever known before. Brought her many pleasures, also heartaches, several score. Held her tightly about the waist, now broader at the beam. Added some weight here and there, not as much as it might seem. He gradually drooped her shoulders; shiny hair now turns to gray. Faded memories of life's passing parade now help to pass her day. Her youthful pace is throttle now, her feet shuffle slowly across the floor. Though still a thing of beauty, that beauty is different than before. Time for her is now slipping away, slowly heading for life’s stage door. The journey has left her exhausted, no longer willing to fight the fight, but unwilling to beg for more. Time had been an exciting lover, but she will not love another day. She lies prone upon the sheet as Time exits the stage. I watch with amazement as the scene just fades away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/6/2016 6:49:00 PM
Ah yes, the wisdom of age. If I could only put this ego I now possess into that body I had back then... One big difference is my big hope to love big another day. Thank you for directing me here.
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Donald J Bennett
Date: 1/6/2016 8:40:00 PM
Thank you my dear Jean. The best of luck with your quest for love.
Date: 10/5/2015 10:13:00 PM
Donald, a fascinating write. Like a good book, I was hooked to the end. I felt like I was gazing through that window too. Leaves me looking for more. I think I'm going to enjoy your poetry. : ) Janece
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Jan Terry
Date: 10/6/2015 10:15:00 AM
I'll really have to read 'Lucinda'. That's my middle name and also my pen name ('Lucinda DeWitt'.) Hugs. Janece
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Donald J Bennett
Date: 10/5/2015 10:24:00 PM
Thank you Janece. The premise for this piece came to me by way of a dream and I think that it is one of my better writes. Another by way of a dream is "Lucinda". Still waiting for another but the dream fairy must have lost my address.
Date: 4/11/2015 3:24:00 AM
Hi Donald! Stopped by to read your first contribution to Soup, and I am very much impressed by this classic write. There is no holding back time, nor the changes that it brings. // paul
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Donald J Bennett
Date: 4/13/2015 6:30:00 PM
thank you so much for you kind remarks. I almost missed several messages because for some reason comments from soup is routed to my deleted file.
Date: 8/4/2014 7:26:00 PM
What a beautiful piece of poetry this is. I will favor this one. Your first poem and it's perfect. Thanks for sharing and the visit to my page. I will read more of your poetry later... Lucila
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Date: 1/31/2014 8:30:00 AM
I remember reading this piece and I am still beyond impressed. I see why I added it to my favorites. You my friend are no novice.
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Date: 12/22/2013 10:14:00 AM
Donald, this is just excellent. Using the illustration of old man time is great. I think this is my favorite: "He swiftly knelt beside her, and stroked her heaving chest, Carefully caressed every curve, and sagged her gentle breast."
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Date: 12/18/2013 9:09:00 PM
You are a fine poet Donald, I don't know why I haven't read you as often. I read this poem a few months back. It reminds me how deep, and precious time is... Sadly, how it just cannot stay.... :-)..LINDA
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Date: 12/18/2013 2:51:00 AM
I had no online time yesterday, so just to say, I'm tweeting when I finish writing. Thanks mate.
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Date: 12/15/2013 4:07:00 PM
Would you allow me to tweet a link to this poem please? I don't have many followers, but I would like the opportunity to share this piece with a larger audience.
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Donald J Bennett
Date: 12/15/2013 4:18:00 PM
Scott; I have no objections to you doing so in fact I would be honored to have you do so. I believe that it is one of my better pieces.
Date: 11/29/2013 8:11:00 AM
I beleve this is the first piece I have rad of yours and it is going straight to favorites. This is a brilliant piece of writing.
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Donald J Bennett
Date: 11/29/2013 11:47:00 AM
Thank you sir. You flatter me. I find it rather strange how an idea for a piece such as this just pops into ones head uninvited and lingers there until you write it down.
Date: 11/24/2013 3:48:00 PM
That is a fantastic piece of poetry.
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Date: 10/4/2013 8:28:00 PM
I like the tippy toe-ing feeling around time.. Or should I say, the feeling as if time has slipped and passed right by.... Donald, i love and enjoy this one. I wish we could tag poems, I would tag this one:-) with my own Time Poem.. different, .... time is not easy to escape... thank you for sharing the beauty and the taste of this... xox~ Linda
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Date: 11/8/2012 9:46:00 AM
Donald; Thanks for inviting me to read this poem. It is one of the best. I will put it as one of my favorites. The ageing prosses is something that we all will go through if we live to get old. I will be reading more of your poetry. I have two here ( She Was beautiful ) and ( When We Get Old ). Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 9/24/2012 12:00:00 AM
Indeed...Quite the fine write I must say.It's beautiful! I will read on...I hope that put a smile on your wifes face.. Ha,ha :o) Thanks for stopping by my page so I could find your words of beauty.
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Date: 9/9/2012 2:40:00 PM
Fine work here! Were you referring to someone you know? Nice rhymes and an unusual take on aging. Our society is basically a youth - oriented one so it is refreshing to see a description of aging such as this one. Thank you for your kind words about my work. Peace &Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 7/29/2012 11:54:00 AM
Don...this is beautiful...Damn, I feel like it was written for me ;)
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Date: 7/29/2012 12:57:00 AM
Thanks for your comments Donald and your direction to this poem. You wrote a great poem about the ravages of time and the thing is there is no way we can stick around and avoid the changes. Nice to find you here. Love, Joyce
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