Time's a Tease

Time is a tease It makes a plan Then kicks the can ~ No one is pleased

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/1/2019 6:43:00 PM

Short, concise, succinct, and sagely and utterly true!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/1/2019 8:58:00 PM

I think your comment is as long as the poem. (Neither is verbose). Thanks!! :) gw

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/1/2019 8:02:00 AM

Time can make a flower bloom and then make it die in the cycle of its scope. I love the way you put it Gershon. xxoo

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/1/2019 8:52:00 AM

Connie, I appreciate your insightful comment and the support. Thank you so much, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/1/2019 6:00:00 AM

Yes! We must enjoy the moments.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/1/2019 8:51:00 AM

---Every precious moment --- Right you are, Kim! :) gw

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/31/2019 10:41:00 PM

I feel your frustration, Gershon.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/1/2019 8:53:00 AM

All I can say is that if you can feel my frustration, Line, then either you should be under 24/7 medical care---or you're just more of a saint than I had imagined. Blessings, my friend, Gershon

CayCay Jennings

Date: 7/31/2019 10:05:00 PM

It's true and ain't it rude! How dare time steal based laid dreams and plans from us. Me thinks its selfish as well as oblivious to our feelings. Great summary of all that in your witty gem of brevity! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/1/2019 8:50:00 AM

Ars longa; vita brevis....as the Romans put it. Thank you once again, CayCay for your illuminating, luminescent comments, support, and words of wisdom! Best wishes, gw