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Timely Dish

TIMELY DISH Vanilla creme and pearls - foreshadows sway. Romantic candlelight, bliss-scented wish. She twirls her necklace, perfume of salt spray. Vanilla creme and pearls, foreshadows sway. His rugged face, upturned, she makes his day. He glances, helpless, at this timely dish. Romantic candlelight, bliss-scented wish. Vanilla creme and pearls, foreshadows sway. 8/30/2017 Triolet

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Date: 8/31/2017 8:28:00 AM
Excellent job with this form Kim...it is probably my least favorite....ok -- I hate trying to write the Triolet....and am amazed by those who do it so gracefully.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/31/2017 9:33:00 AM
Thanks, John! Learning to find the pattern and decide where to begin. Some poems begin from the top. This one has to work at the top and bottom :)
Date: 8/31/2017 6:02:00 AM
Love this form--well written, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/31/2017 6:05:00 AM
Thanks, Vijay!
Date: 8/31/2017 3:52:00 AM
- Great written, Kim - // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/31/2017 6:05:00 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise!

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