Timeless Love

It seems your face 
is timeless
deep
in my mind. From
the first time I saw you,
the image
of your face
stuck 
in my mind 'til now.
I cannot 
delete
or reboot my my mind
to erase
memories
of your face. If my
mind was
a computer,
and you a software,
no virus would
infect you!


Date: 09/03/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kitchen Avatar
March 25, 2015 at 12:18 PM
Teddy, Beautifully put my friend and something I can relate too! Tim
Kimathi Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 9:45 AM
Thank you Tim! ;-)
Chakrabarty Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 10:17 AM
Using Computer terms ...o great Teddy. Congrats on win. Love...rajat
Kimathi Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 10:57 AM
Thank you so much for your applause Rajat! ;-)
A. Sharma Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 3:00 AM
Great one Teddy! Congrats on fine win!
Kimathi Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 10:56 AM
Thank you Dr. Upma! ^_^
Allison Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 3:37 PM
I like your take on the theme - congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
Kimathi Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 2:41 AM
Thank you for your applause Jan! ^_^
Nance Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 2:52 PM
I like that, if my mind was a computer and you a software, no virus would infect you-what a line, I dig it! :) grats on your contest placement :)
Kimathi Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 2:36 AM
Thank you for your applause Casarah! I'm glad you enjoyed my piece! ^_^
Hamilton Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 9:18 PM
congrats on placing Teddy hugs
Kimathi Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 12:49 AM
Thank you so much Shadow! ^_^
La France Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 10:46 AM
Teddy, I love this poem that is full of deep love and touches me deeply as I see my husbands face in my mind every single day although he is but words now engraved in stone, well done and thanks for visiting my poetry . .
Kimathi Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 2:24 AM
You are always welcome Broken Wings! Thank you for enjoying my read! ^_^ Sorry for your loss. There is a Zen quote that I live by today, that makes me accept life as it is. "No snowflake falls at the wrong place".
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