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Timeless Love

Eyes meet and hands touch, as two lives join hearts entwine in the silence of timeless love.

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/18/2025 8:52:00 AM

Ron, this is lovely. CONGRATS on your win. Janice

Ron VanHooser
Date: 7/24/2025 2:40:00 PM

Thanks Janice, I'm pleased you liked it. I don't know why the short poems are more difficult to write, but then, I'm picky and want everything perfect. LOL Thanks again. Ron

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/2/2025 10:42:00 AM

Hello Ron, Yes a timeless love that has a strong bond with each other. Your friend, /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/2/2025 4:17:00 PM

Hello Ron, Ron I saw nothing wrong with this poem. Well okay I think you did very well on this poem. I wil send you an email soon. Your friend. Darlene/

Ron VanHooser
Date: 7/2/2025 12:17:00 PM

Hi Darlene, this was one of those poems that never seemed to be quite right. I have edited it again and hopefully it is better than it was. I like it but was never quite satisfied with it. Have a wonderful afternoon! Your friend, Ron

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/1/2025 4:29:00 PM

Hi Ron, I had to reach out to you when I read your poem... For your consideration, I think it would make a world of difference if you switched L3 and L2. See what you think.

Ron VanHooser
Date: 7/2/2025 12:14:00 PM

Hi, it is funny that one can write a poem that spans four pages, and requires virtually no editing, but four lines takes endless editing passes, and this was the case for this poem. You are right, I think, and I have edited the poem accordingly. Thank you again.