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Timeless

Love knows no separation
                     not in measured distance
                               nor in death...

Copyright © Charlie Smith | Year Posted 2017

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September 24, 2021 at 5:38 AM

Wow... Well penned

Darlene De Beaulieu

November 3, 2017 at 2:09 PM

Charlie when no one comments on a poem,what does that mean? My cinquain has comments but there are no comments that I can see.I do not understand why it is like this. Thank you

October 25, 2017 at 6:47 PM

Wonderful. The last word packs a punch... as obviously intended. Bravo.

October 25, 2017 at 8:31 PM

Thank you Line

September 18, 2017 at 11:35 AM

Very true

September 18, 2017 at 1:45 PM

Thanks Kim.

Francis J Grasso

August 25, 2017 at 10:36 PM

Oh, Charlie these words are beautiful, and they mean everything. ...Fran

August 25, 2017 at 10:40 PM

Thank you Francis...

August 24, 2017 at 9:57 PM

SO BRILLIANTLY DEEP AND TRUE IN SUCH FEW WORDS! I agree with Susan, this is a timeless treasure! A fav my friend...

August 25, 2017 at 11:06 AM

Thank you Robert...

August 23, 2017 at 8:34 PM

Oh breathtakingly beautiful! Your monoku is a timeless treasure. Truly enjoyed your poem :)

August 23, 2017 at 10:22 PM

Thank you for your kind words Susan....

August 23, 2017 at 8:17 PM

So true, well said Charlie, so much said in so few words, I admire that a lot, I tend to repeat myself sometimes.

August 23, 2017 at 10:20 PM

Thank you John...

August 21, 2017 at 8:29 PM

You said it in three lines...nothing can be added or subtracted...Clear as daylight...Thanks for sharing...Have a good night

August 21, 2017 at 9:28 PM

Thank you Arturo, I appreciate your encouragement...

August 21, 2017 at 10:32 AM

This is a fantastic bit of poetry--truly brilliant!! My best regards, Charlie. :) john

August 21, 2017 at 10:59 AM

Thank you John...

August 16, 2017 at 8:14 PM

True in excellence; shalom/JUSTICE

August 16, 2017 at 9:31 PM

Thank you Anil, peace be with you...

August 7, 2017 at 4:38 PM

How true that is! Nice one! Saving, Charlie!

August 16, 2017 at 9:31 PM

Thank you Kim...

Eileen Manassian

August 6, 2017 at 4:54 PM

Amen to that...Beautifully structured monoku, Charlie. Loved this.

August 6, 2017 at 6:58 PM

Thank you Eileen.

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 6, 2017 at 8:30 AM

- Excellent, Charlie - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

August 6, 2017 at 9:13 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise.

Darlene De Beaulieu

August 5, 2017 at 8:59 PM

Hello Charlie, my friend.This is a beautiful Monoku. I will try to do one soon. Can it be on any theme? Just wondering. have a nice evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu

August 6, 2017 at 5:39 PM

Cahrlie I am not sure if I did a Monoku or not. Please read my monoku{ I think I got it but I am not sure. Thank you. my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu

August 6, 2017 at 3:42 PM

I will work on a Monoku at least I am going to try.

August 5, 2017 at 10:35 PM

Darlene thanks. A Monoku is a one line Haiku and by that definition it should deal with the natural state. But it's generally accepted when dealing with other subjects, at least here at the soup. That's the way I view it, others might disagree...

Andrea Dietrich

August 5, 2017 at 7:55 PM

that is ONE great little poem!!!

August 5, 2017 at 10:36 PM

Thank you My Dear...

August 4, 2017 at 5:09 PM

So much said with so few words. Loved it :)

August 4, 2017 at 7:59 PM

Thank you Carol...

Freddie Robinson Jr.

August 4, 2017 at 12:57 PM

Very poignant poem, Charlie. The truth inked by your words concerning love is timeless. Pure poetry. Loved reading this while listening to "Hanging On" by Active Child. Very peaceful. Love and joy always, my friend.

August 4, 2017 at 7:59 PM

Thank you Freddie, peace be with you...

August 3, 2017 at 8:59 AM

Great monoku my friend...love has no boundaries...^WW^

August 3, 2017 at 10:32 AM

Thanks WW...

Demetrios Trifiatis

August 3, 2017 at 7:30 AM

Brilliant my friend, Charlie! Who would disagree?

August 3, 2017 at 10:32 AM

Thank you Demetrios...

Connie Marcum Wong

August 2, 2017 at 8:26 PM

A poem to memorize! True and exquisitely written! : )

August 2, 2017 at 11:19 PM

You are too kind Connie...

August 2, 2017 at 7:27 PM

such truth in your words Charlie - am adding this to my faves ... we found out yesterday that a very dear friend had passed away - that will be 3 funerals in 3 weeks for me:-( hugs jan xx

August 2, 2017 at 11:22 PM

Not the way to spend your summer Jan, so sorry for your sadness...

August 2, 2017 at 2:49 PM

ohh, astonishing monoku enlightening me with your wisdom, charlie..huggs

August 2, 2017 at 11:14 PM

Such kind words, thank you Nette...

August 2, 2017 at 2:23 PM

Excellent this is Charlie. I love it :)

August 2, 2017 at 11:13 PM

Thank you Heidi.

August 2, 2017 at 2:13 PM

This is poetry, loved this!

August 2, 2017 at 11:11 PM

Thank you so much Arthur.

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