Timeless

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^{_{"Sometimes the memeories of the past lay about everywhere, in everything, and never leave your heart."}}

On the cusp of favor brimming in the flavor of missing minutes, laid about the streets curved around sockets of setting suns. Along roadsides and dug deep under sand dunes, I collect forgotten pearls planted in the dismantled timepiece of my chest. I close my eyes letting the hours, months, and years sink in. However broken these wheels and springs, for you, this pendulum forever swings.

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Eve Roper

Date: 11/10/2020 9:28:00 PM

Lovely write, Andreanna, well written and said. Enjoyed reading. Eve

Johnathon Souders

Date: 11/10/2020 6:00:00 PM

Great write, thanks.

Juliet Ligon

Date: 4/16/2018 8:06:00 PM

Great use of alliteration!

Pashang Salehi

Date: 7/27/2017 7:58:00 PM

a pendulum that forever swings between unsustainable optimism and unjustified pessimism is truly timeless.

Stark Hunter

Date: 6/28/2017 9:18:00 PM

One of my favorites of your poetry here at PS. Nice alliteration and phrasing. ..."Along roadsides and dug deep under sand dunes, I collect forgotten pearls planted in the dismantled timepiece of my chest..."