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Time Weeps

Time weeps & weeps for it cannot die each moment hurts, as it feels the why it's pain it drags, as it holds the lie time weeps and weeps, for it will not die.

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James Inman

Date: 10/25/2017 9:03:00 AM

Hi Jackie, this short piece is beautiful. Did you know there is a Short Story section on Poetry Soup? Go to -Member area-Manager Short Stories-Add New Short Story to post one.

Jackie Elston
Date: 10/26/2017 2:24:00 PM

Hi James..thank you for your comment,thats very kind. lv only just found there a short story section, lm still trying to navigate around this lovely site. l'll have to put some of my short stories on there ,it would be lovely to get some feedback on them.Jackie

Jackie Elston

Date: 7/5/2017 2:49:00 AM

Thank you for yr comment. l wrote this in Dec 2016 when l first started to write poems,before, it was just short stories. l realised after all these yrs l should put on paper all my thoughts.Now l cant stop :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/4/2017 8:44:00 PM

Yes the time does weep, and still is weeping e ven now. I like this poem.