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Time Waster

Your time is precious Though mine slips through my fingers Not making a sound

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John Lawless

Date: 6/25/2023 5:55:00 AM

HMMM....are you saying.....or are you saying....no wait.....that's time trickling thru the crevices. great Senyru

Di11y Da11y
Date: 6/25/2023 6:19:00 AM

Now John, I have no idea what you were thinking but now I have several alternate story lines that cast me in a bad light (or maybe even a red light) - it's time of course it's time... :) Good job I'm a fan of yours

Paul Willason

Date: 6/25/2023 5:53:00 AM

A little gem of a poem carrying much meaning. A moment of insight caught in a few words...like.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 6/25/2023 6:15:00 AM

Thanks Paul