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Time Warp-Fright

Life changed in an instant Explosion, posessions littered, poignant Distant siren's wail, mother chants, My baby, my baby!! life shant End today, only six month's delay-don't rant. Posessions, my slant can be replaced. Life can't! Poesy- Danielle White's contest, Time warp, etc.

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Date: 11/17/2009 8:37:00 AM
wow that was intense! like being pulled down to earth at rapid speeds... wonderful writing my friend :)
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Date: 10/20/2009 12:15:00 PM
Intense and heart gripping poetry, Doris. Good luck in the contest with this moving poetry! Love, Robin
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Date: 10/19/2009 2:40:00 PM
Very well done, Doris! In times of tragedy, we may lose possessions, but saving lives is far more important than saving material things. Much to ponder in this excellent verse. You're a very good writer, Doris. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/19/2009 9:42:00 AM
Interesting write. Is this the wreck from yesterday? Keep writing. Mom
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Date: 10/19/2009 8:07:00 AM
This intense and captivating. Makes me want to know more! ~ Good luck in the contest! ~ Love, Carrie
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