Time Travelling


On such days
what holds my senses 
to the world loosens 
and all becomes a background 
blur, a kind of peripheral haze 
as seen through a rain glazed
window to that place ‘out there’. 
My mind drifts and soon

I am here where time
has stood still and a hot
summer sun prints the cool shade
of almond trees on ground 
where I lay during those long, lazy
afternoons on school holidays
seventy years ago, 
dreaming of a future, 
the adventures I would have 
in a world to come, the one
I live in now.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Lane Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 2:32 PM
I've often read of time travel, Paul but not wishing I could do it unless promised I could return to the present. I'll just daydream about it as you do. Loved the line, "...summer sun prints the cool shade of almond trees on ground."
Willason Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 9:37 PM
Like you, think time travel is best constrained within memory and the imagination..the destination is therefore reasonably assured. Many thanks dear Lin for sharing my little time jump...always welcomed. Take care, Paul
M  Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 4:35 AM
Another Paul journey enjoyed! I remember those days of dreaming about my future life….and here we are now seniors!! How the years pass so quickly Paul! Beautiful…Debx
Willason Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 6:31 AM
So true Deb...and the older one gets the faster time passes. Glad you enjoyed this poem. Take care my friend...
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 19, 2025 at 5:27 PM
I felt as if I was participating in your life -- the images gave this poem such life and meaning as did the last two lines. Captivating for sure! enjoy your evening, Sara
Willason Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 6:28 AM
The subject of time is always a reservoir for poetry...pipes easily into one's own life and connects the past to the present with recalled memories. Proust and his Madeleine cakes is the standard model. Thanks Sara for yr comments.
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