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Time Travel

A thin trail of smoke rises from his discarded pipe. A stark shadow falls from his hat brim, as he leans into the beam of light. He clasps his hands together and rests them on the desk top. From behind him you hear the creak of leather shoes, as the wearer shifts his unseen bulk. You imagine what you cannot see under that brim. Piercing, merciless eyes, focussed on you. They measure you, calculating. Wooden groans echo as the stateroom moves with the tide. The hand on your shoulder attempts a reassuring squeeze. Then the Captain clears his throat… “But the fact remains time travel limits opportunity. How? I hear you ask. Let us say the birds sing and the sun shines, and your true love holds your hand. Well you’d alter time if you possibly could, to keep this cherished love grand. But you just may well put at risk Destiny’s master plan. For when this love did end you’d earn your reward, a prize so dear and sweet. The understanding and consuming passion of a brilliant flame, who now, you’ll never meet.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/17/2017 4:01:00 AM
Amazing story, I love your poems man!
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Date: 9/23/2016 11:22:00 AM
Scott....suspense, twists & surprise endings! poetic condensed novel! good work....jim
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Date: 8/9/2016 8:39:00 PM
Well this was different! In the best of ways; I enjoyed reading this piece of yours very much so! Great read and an even greater write <3
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Date: 7/3/2016 2:12:00 PM
Looking at your writings Scott I am seeing forms of poetry about which I know nothing. Very lovely. I am really uneducated in this field of the written word but I'm learning
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Date: 3/2/2016 8:12:00 AM
What a lovely page with a profound group of words. I am loving every aspect of this piece. Thumbs up friend and a definite 7
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Date: 12/6/2015 11:30:00 AM
Spooky good, Scott! Fuels the reader's imagination!
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Date: 11/27/2015 12:00:00 PM
Awesome! Very inspiring to give it a try! Thanks Scott!
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Date: 11/22/2015 3:55:00 PM
scott, let me get this clear. This free form Haibun starts out prose and finishes with some other form? Any form? if that is all it is, maybe I will try!
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Date: 11/21/2015 3:40:00 PM
love this thoughtful & thought provoking write, mate
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Date: 11/20/2015 10:25:00 PM
Wonderfully composed Free style Haibun, as you are calling it. You have maintained the essence of Haibun in it so skilfully that it is inspiring me to right one, too. Warm regards, Bobby
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Date: 11/19/2015 11:37:00 AM
ah the dangers of time travel. very cool poem
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Date: 11/16/2015 7:52:00 PM
Scott a good sample for your contest, I hope I'll have some muse later and more time to sit and write a good one like this.. =`)~OLive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 11/7/2015 8:40:00 AM
Scott, this is very nice, I like it a lot and a great example for your contest, I hope I can create something as beautiful for you ~
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Date: 11/7/2015 7:56:00 AM
Scott, the muse just shouted from the other room.....DON'T EVEN THINK ABOUT IT!!.....this is the best Haibun Hybrid I've ever read....but then again.....it's the only one....anyone has ever read. Seriously though this is a wonderful weaving of prose and poetry. You have set the bar high for this new form.
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Date: 11/6/2015 12:09:00 PM
Thoughtful adventuring write here Scott..' 7.'
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Date: 11/3/2015 10:44:00 PM
I like the topic Scott, to be there all over again. Love LINDA
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Date: 11/2/2015 8:28:00 PM
I like the change in this form you have made Scott. It is such an interesting concept that if we change anything really, how would that affect the present and future. Your ending strikes that note so clearly. Wonderful work!
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Date: 10/30/2015 7:51:00 AM
- A great poem, Scott .... interesting form "HAIBUN FREE - STYLE" and theme - I wish you a beautiful and relaxed weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/29/2015 12:10:00 PM
this is indeed captivating, just love this.
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Date: 10/28/2015 8:36:00 AM
Charmed beginning to a short story! Go Scott Light & Love
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Date: 10/25/2015 9:13:00 AM
I once tried to write about this topic but I stayed in front of the blank paper for like 2 days and I just quitted. I'm so glad you pulled it off in a great fashion!
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Date: 10/25/2015 7:23:00 AM
Interesting topic chosen for the Haiburn..Creative style..Sara
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Date: 10/22/2015 3:36:00 PM
yes, that is something to ponder about time travel, Scott!! The first part reminds me of that author that wrote of time travel. Was it supposed to be him? (I forgot his name). The ending is full of wisdom. So this is your new invention? For me the prose and free verse are so similar. I think it would be cool if first part were prose or free and second part were rhyme!!
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Date: 10/22/2015 3:33:00 PM
Scott you are not reading the blogs at Soup.Then you will easily know what i am talking about bad manners!! Now let me read this new poem of yours.
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Date: 10/22/2015 12:20:00 PM
Nicely done, Scott. I like the way the poem moves swiftly along - Excellent! My very best regards as always, Scott! :) john
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