Time Travel

A thin trail of smoke rises from his discarded pipe. A stark shadow falls from his hat brim, as he leans into the beam of light. He clasps his hands together and rests them on the desk top. From behind him you hear the creak of leather shoes, as the wearer shifts his unseen bulk. You imagine what you cannot see under that brim. Piercing, merciless eyes, focussed on you. They measure you, calculating. Wooden groans echo as the stateroom moves with the tide. The hand on your shoulder attempts a reassuring squeeze. Then the Captain clears his throat…

 
“But the fact remains
time travel limits opportunity.
How?
I hear you ask.

Let us say
the birds sing
and the sun shines,
and your true love
holds your hand.

Well you’d alter time
if you possibly could,
to keep this
cherished love grand.

But you just
may well
put at risk
Destiny’s master plan.

For when this love
did end
you’d earn your reward,
a prize so dear
and sweet.

The understanding
and consuming passion
of a brilliant flame,
who now, you’ll
never meet.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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S. Avatar
June 17, 2017 at 4:01 AM
Amazing story, I love your poems man!
Goff Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 11:22 AM
Scott....suspense, twists & surprise endings! poetic condensed novel! good work....jim
Corbin Avatar
August 9, 2016 at 8:39 PM
Well this was different! In the best of ways; I enjoyed reading this piece of yours very much so! Great read and an even greater write <3
Smith Avatar
July 3, 2016 at 2:12 PM
Looking at your writings Scott I am seeing forms of poetry about which I know nothing. Very lovely. I am really uneducated in this field of the written word but I'm learning
Makama Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 8:12 AM
What a lovely page with a profound group of words. I am loving every aspect of this piece. Thumbs up friend and a definite 7
Goff Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 11:30 AM
Spooky good, Scott! Fuels the reader's imagination!
Fogel Avatar
November 27, 2015 at 12:00 PM
Awesome! Very inspiring to give it a try! Thanks Scott!
Dietrich Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 3:55 PM
scott, let me get this clear. This free form Haibun starts out prose and finishes with some other form? Any form? if that is all it is, maybe I will try!
Horne Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 3:40 PM
love this thoughtful & thought provoking write, mate
Tagore Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 10:25 PM
Wonderfully composed Free style Haibun, as you are calling it. You have maintained the essence of Haibun in it so skilfully that it is inspiring me to right one, too. Warm regards, Bobby
D. Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 11:37 AM
ah the dangers of time travel. very cool poem
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 7:52 PM
Scott a good sample for your contest, I hope I'll have some muse later and more time to sit and write a good one like this.. =`)~OLive Eloisa =`)
La France Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 8:40 AM
Scott, this is very nice, I like it a lot and a great example for your contest, I hope I can create something as beautiful for you ~
Lawless Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 7:56 AM
Scott, the muse just shouted from the other room.....DON'T EVEN THINK ABOUT IT!!.....this is the best Haibun Hybrid I've ever read....but then again.....it's the only one....anyone has ever read. Seriously though this is a wonderful weaving of prose and poetry. You have set the bar high for this new form.
Maverick Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 12:09 PM
Thoughtful adventuring write here Scott..' 7.'
A   Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 10:44 PM
I like the topic Scott, to be there all over again. Love LINDA
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 8:28 PM
I like the change in this form you have made Scott. It is such an interesting concept that if we change anything really, how would that affect the present and future. Your ending strikes that note so clearly. Wonderful work!
Andresen Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 7:51 AM
- A great poem, Scott .... interesting form "HAIBUN FREE - STYLE" and theme - I wish you a beautiful and relaxed weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Horsman Avatar
October 29, 2015 at 12:10 PM
this is indeed captivating, just love this.
Guzzi Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 8:36 AM
Charmed beginning to a short story! Go Scott Light & Love
Artis Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 9:13 AM
I once tried to write about this topic but I stayed in front of the blank paper for like 2 days and I just quitted. I'm so glad you pulled it off in a great fashion!
Kendrick Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 7:23 AM
Interesting topic chosen for the Haiburn..Creative style..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 3:36 PM
yes, that is something to ponder about time travel, Scott!! The first part reminds me of that author that wrote of time travel. Was it supposed to be him? (I forgot his name). The ending is full of wisdom. So this is your new invention? For me the prose and free verse are so similar. I think it would be cool if first part were prose or free and second part were rhyme!!
Dietrich Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 3:33 PM
Scott you are not reading the blogs at Soup.Then you will easily know what i am talking about bad manners!! Now let me read this new poem of yours.
Fleming Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 12:20 PM
Nicely done, Scott. I like the way the poem moves swiftly along - Excellent! My very best regards as always, Scott! :) john
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